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So I'm taking that as a yes. Re Love's stories - they do differ a little in readability; some seem easier than others, and she has definitely improved in recent months - practicing like all of us, I'm sure. One thing I really love about ESL writers actually is how the flow is quite different because the structure tends to echo their native language, with word substitutions. And if that is a romance language (which most of them are) it can add a real quality of dreaminess that works superbly for some stories. I've been thinking about offering to beta for her for a while, and I think she'd take it reasonably well - I just can't keep up with her output by myself. (Lemon should remind me I promised to look at Housesitters for her ... and I haven't really made a start on that.) And I had a moment of Christmas spirit and signed up for the Christmas exchange too, dammit. I really tried not to! |
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And, no, he's not sitting Indian-style in that pic. I remember that part. They were discussing upcoming stories before all the bad stuff went down, so he's sitting with his ankle kind of propped up on his other knee. Sort of the way a lot of guys cross their legs. As far as Love's stories go, I'm not sure if she's ever asked for help. She is always so wonderfully sweet whenever we talk, but I don't really know her well enough to know how she would take the offer. She's far braver than I could ever be as I would never even TRY writing in a language that wasn't English. I know I'd fail at it to the extreme. I'm always SO impressed by how good her writing is for a secondary language. Plus, she really is a fabulous storyteller. And something I've noticed in her more recent writing, she's gotten really good at ending a story. She always tucks some life lesson in her ender that I find really beautiful. And a few have brought me to tears because I didn't feel they only applied to the Revo world, but to the real one as well. And hey, look at Jaq joining us for Christmas fic exchange. We wore you down, didn't we? Sometimes a little Charloe fluff and smut and happy endings are nice around the holidays. |
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I need to call it a night guys - someone has to cook dinner for these munchkins and I told the husband I'd make trifle to welcome them home, so better get on top of that. Have good weeks, and thanks for the kind words about my new story
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