Once Upon A Time - {Dearies} Rumple/Mr. Gold #72: "Dark One lies. Dark One tricks." - Page 3

Rhonwen · 12-14-2014, 05:54 AM

let's hope it something that makes our Rumple not so evil.

I still need my story read and critique if anyone can do that. It's almost time to submit our stories and mine is particularly painful. BUt I really need to know if it's ok, or if I need to rewrite it to have it make sense while I still have time..

anyone? anyone? PM me your email address if you can and I'll send it over. It's only 2600 words.

I can't get it to format with just the reg fanform pm

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the blue fairy: you had the way, you didn’t take it. and there are no more magic beans.
rumplestiltskin: that’s a lie.
the blue fairy: we don’t do that.
rumplestiltskin: a lie.
the blue fairy: you will never make it to that world.

X

A/E are either really brilliant the Blue manipulated Rumple into creating the curse. OR the really had no plan and Rumple looks like a derp because there were so many other ways to get to LWOM. I'm guessing it's the latter.

Jinzle · 12-14-2014, 07:56 AM

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Originally Posted by Rhonwen (View Post)

let's hope it something that makes our Rumple not so evil.

A/E are either really brilliant the Blue manipulated Rumple into creating the curse. OR the really had no plan and Rumple looks like a derp because there were so many other ways to get to LWOM. I'm guessing it's the latter.

You also forgot that there were magic beans. Hook had one and Prince James and Jack snatched a whole bunch from Tiny and his family. I am sure Rumple could have found a way to make a deal with the Giants to get a bean.

Kelaine · 12-14-2014, 10:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Rhonwen (View Post)

let's hope it something that makes our Rumple not so evil.

I still need my story read and critique if anyone can do that. It's almost time to submit our stories and mine is particularly painful. BUt I really need to know if it's ok, or if I need to rewrite it to have it make sense while I still have time..

anyone? anyone? PM me your email address if you can and I'll send it over. It's only 2600 words.

I can't get it to format with just the reg fanform pm

Sorry, I think I've been oblivious. What are you submitting a story for? Is this a fanforum thing I missed?

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A/E are either really brilliant the Blue manipulated Rumple into creating the curse. OR the really had no plan and Rumple looks like a derp because there were so many other ways to get to LWOM. I'm guessing it's the latter.

I'd like it if they turned out to be brilliant. Her original plan--send a lame man to our world in a time and place where the unemployed starved to death on the streets or went into the workhouse and starved to death there (at least children frequently did). What kind of sadist dumps someone in that with no job skills, no safety net, no friends, and not even any familiarity with local customs?

Rhonwen · 12-14-2014, 12:22 PM

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Sorry, I think I've been oblivious. What are you submitting a story for? Is this a fanforum thing I missed?

I'd like it if they turned out to be brilliant. Her original plan--send a lame man to our world in a time and place where the unemployed starved to death on the streets or went into the workhouse and starved to death there (at least children frequently did). What kind of sadist dumps someone in that with no job skills, no safety net, no friends, and not even any familiarity with local customs?

It's the Rumbelle Secret Sana on Tumblr. ANd I may have missed it if you posted to me. Sorry.

Grace52373 · 12-14-2014, 01:20 PM

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It's the Rumbelle Secret Sana on Tumblr. ANd I may have missed it if you posted to me. Sorry.

Rho, did you get my pm with my e-mail?

Yes I emailed it to you.. I'll do it again right now

**crazy_diamond** · 12-14-2014, 01:30 PM

This sorcerer guy has got to be in it somehow, I've probably jinxed it now I've said that

, well we might know soon enough..

Rhonwen · 12-14-2014, 02:13 PM

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Rho, did you get my pm with my e-mail?

Yes I emailed it to you.. I'll do it again right now

Yes I emailed it to you.. I'll do it again right now

Grace52373 · 12-14-2014, 04:19 PM

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Yes I emailed it to you.. I'll do it again right now

I got it and sent it back to you with the corrections on a word document and I left a comment to.

Jinzle · 12-14-2014, 04:44 PM

I just got home from work Rho and I got your email. I guess you don't need me since Grace has done such a wonderful job.

Rhonwen · 12-14-2014, 05:26 PM

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I just got home from work Rho and I got your email. I guess you don't need me since Grace has done such a wonderful job.

oh no..I'd love another opinion. I always want to hear what everyone thinks.

I want to see this Rumple tonight. The one that struggles between his darkness, the curse and the good man. I want him to look at Belle with so much love that even knowing he was going to die to save her believed this was all worth it.

T'Lynn · 12-14-2014, 06:51 PM

I am heartbroken for Rumple!

Bravo RC!

Jinzle · 12-14-2014, 07:04 PM

At least he's got the cane. I always thought he was sexier with it.

Violet Faust · 12-14-2014, 07:14 PM

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At least he's got the cane. I always thought he was sexier with it.

Very true. But small comforts, LOL.

baelfire24 · 12-14-2014, 07:22 PM

Robert deserves all the awards for that scene at the town line. I felt so bad for him. I really hope he changes his ways in the next half of the season.

You can't kill me! · 12-14-2014, 07:23 PM

Rumple

Way to break my freaking heart writers

I know that he needed to be stopped.. but that was just excessively painful


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