Subject87

PM'ed, it's a bit short but I think it'll be okay.

Venetia

@Subject87: I need to bump the thread up, so I will post a brief review here. I loved it, it was awesome! I also liked how you addressed so many POV's including Mrs. Benson's. My favorite part was the Sam and Gibby scenes. Their dialogue is so entertaining and just in-character. I like how you made Sam realize that Carly had feelings for Freddie. I also really liked at how you provided some insight about why Freddie was paranoid and the unresolved issues/hurt that occurred with the aftermath of iSYL. I liked the sentiment with Carly wanting to be better friend to Freddie and her dealing with new emotions that must be confusing for her. I like the gradual buildup.


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Subject87

@Venetia

Thanks, I kinda had issues towards the end of the chapter. But the next chapter will start a brand new day and hopefully some brand new ideas.

I honestly don't know where this story will go Just whenever I get ideas.

Venetia

I think we need to go on a break. My life is a mess right now. I desperately need to seek new employment and need to set my priorities straight. I need to take some time away from the thread. Besides, we reached our 300 post limit and we need to start a second thread. I will PM Mix about it and she can start the new thread with the new OP after she comes back from her vacation which should be in a week or two. If we get a new episode before then, I may bump it up...otherwise there is not much to discuss. The mods will close this thread at some point anyway.

~Lost and Found~

Hey everyone. Just came here to let you guys know that when you reach 300 posts you need to open a new thread. And you're over it already. So you should open a new one.

Venetia

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