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There was no buildup here. Claire has been visiting Alex several times in the book, and Jack gave her information a good number of times for it too. Plus, they completely changed the way they meet again.
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I think they just tried to cut the boring stuff out. She didn't visit him that often in the book and to be fair, the television show I swear she went to him 3 to 4 times in one episode. She should have just went once. it would have made more sense. These books are incredibly boring, infant 70% of her readership hate her writing after book one because of her needless description of pointless things. The television show has corrected Diana's mistake and made it much better.
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I don't mind the boring cut out, but if explanations on characters' motivation is missing, that is a problem and makes people go:
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that wasn't how it was supposed to be either.
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