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SUSAN I WROTE WORDS. brace yourself. its a truly life altering revelation.
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WOOT! Thanks for the new thread!
That Noel guy is creepy! HOT but creepy! ETA: Steph- I read your paragraph and it's very good...except they didn't dump the tea into the river. It was the Atlantic Ocean, specifically Boston Harbor. That's why it's called The Boston Tea Party. But I really like the spirit of the paper. It's interesting. Also, please avoid using word combinations like "this that". They're vague placeholders. Good luck with writing the rest of your paper! I know it'll be great! __________________
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Aw thank you! Aha, It's a good thing you're here, I should check the facts before I write more
Hm, what would you recommend replacing this with? Or that? Thanks so much for your help I really really appreciate it I'm more cut out to write, like, opinionated essays. The use of facts feels way too restrictive I'm gonna have a real issue when I move past the intro __________________
Jackie get your car Steph | Previously: ladybug70981 |
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You opinionated? NOOOOOOO!
Facts don't have to be restrictive. This is basically an opinion piece anyway. You just have to use facts to back it up. History itself is basically fact and opinion mixed together. HISTORY= HIS STORY. Just pretend you're writing a shipper post and using show canon to back it up. Instead of saying "this that", actually define what you're talking about. Even if you have to repeat it again and again. It keeps things clear. __________________
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tftnt! the title.
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and YES I HEARD. EWWWWW. I FREAKING HATE THAT ACTRESS. I'm sorry, but shes so annoying. I really am not excited to see her on OTH. One more thing to make that show even worse. Quote:
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I'm hoping Ian is blue! __________________
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it depends on what banner is picked.
but i'm doing a blue one. |
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this title is awesome, TFTNT . Noel Kahn is definitely one hot creeper .
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His love hadn't been a thunderbolt from the sky. It had started with a smile, a word, a teasing glance. Andrea ღ|Icon: madness |
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so did you guys hear about this horoscope change thing? WTF?
and what is a friend request on FF? LMAO. I just got one from Kem, I didnt know FF even had that. i did blue for ian and green for paul! i think its fitting. i cant wait for tays. i really love the colors. and vpd too! Last edited by Alexa; 01-13-2011 at 11:33 PM |
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yes it did! from capricorn to sagittarius.
which is bull. I'm totally a capricorn. Quote:
Tumblr users, how do you reblog your own posts? without having to repost the entire thing, obviously. LOL. |
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