gleechild

so... T... think u'll have a chance to check out that preview soon?

MPGirl

Yeah Tati what Sharon said

afeverpitch

I just sent your preview back to you, Mia. And I'm reading through yours now, Sharon.

SHARON! I'm so mad at you, rofl:

MPGirl

Thanks for the help Tati!

afeverpitch

How do you plan to incorporate CB into this chapter? Will you just be using the scene from VV?

WILL THE MOVIE BE DIFFERENT FROM HER FIRST TIME IN REAL LIFE- OR WILL THEY ACTUALLY BE KIND OF THE SAME?

LOL, I don't know why, I just got really excited.

MPGirl

Love the enthusiasm I'm not really sure. Just writing as I go.

I have no idea about the movie. If I make it about the first time, I just don't know what Blair would change. If she would make it Nate, well I refuse to write that For it being with Chuck I think it was the best she would have hoped for.

hmm I have to think on this . . .

afeverpitch

I was thinking if you write the "movie" portion for her first time, it could be like, "No matter how hard she tried, Blair couldn't find a single thing that she would change."

gleechild

yes T, that is all that has thus far been revealed. that thing i told you hasn't come to light yet, and only S and D know about the possibility of an abortion.

MPGirl

haha I should just put: replay limo!sex. Its perfection.

I could actually maybe use that. in some way. Like Blair thinking it through and not being able to find a moment when she was like, umm ew this is all wrong! Cause CB are all that's right

afeverpitch

In that case, Sharon, OMFG I would totally be on the edge of my seat right now! SUSPENSE.

And, geez, I shouldn't have posted so quickly, lol. I just had to go back and fix like 25 billion mistakes on my fic. But overall, and I am so pimping myself right now, I quite like it

gleechild

you pimp, you!

and don't worry, it wasn't anything too noticeable or i would have eye winced instead of reading with utter rapture

so... the 2nd scene thus far is ok? i mean, is it realstic for the characters reactions?

MPGirl

I'm getting tired but I really wanna finish! Hmm not that much left . . .

afeverpitch

FINISH, WOMAN! You can do it!!

And, Sharon, I think the scene is VERY in character. Nate was adorably clueless as always, Chuck was wanting to be let in, Serena was trying to take charge but having difficulty because she's no Blair...

Nothing jumped out at me as "not being right." And I totally just used a double negative.

I also love that you said you read in rapture. That totally makes my, well, life.

gleechild

this chapter is going to get more difficult before it gets any easier though. i always do this to myself.. but the readers are sooo going to love this! don't ya think? don't ya think?

well, it might scare them some... i'm so evil!

afeverpitch

Well, I as a reader love it. And my opinion is the only one that REALLY counts, so... Yes. They will love it