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Old 03-20-2007, 02:09 PM
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The Ficlet Thread #1: Because sometimes our version of the story is better

Welcome to the first ficlet thread!

To start us off here's my first attempt at an Addek ficlet
At the trailer:

Derek: Addison, what are you doing here?
Addison: I left some of my stuff here, i need it back.
Derek: Right, beause you're leaving Seattle..for good?
Addison: Yeah. So can i come in?
Derek: On one condition...
Addison: What condition? I get in and out as soon as possible?
Derek: Not quite...if you wanna do it fast we can but thats not what i had in mind...
Addison: Ok, the fresh air must be affecting my brain because i'm sure you just implied sex.
Derek: No i assure you that your brain is working perfectly
Addison: Then...
*Derek drags her in to the trailer*

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Old 03-20-2007, 03:30 PM
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Great idea!


Derek: So...you don't remember...
Addison: Remember what Derek?
Derek: The promise that you made me...
Addison: I don't know which promise you're talking about and I'm already late. I'm on my way to the airport right now; they're waiting for me...
Derek: Let them wait...
Addison: Derek, are you ok? Because recently it seems like you're not yourself...
Derek: I haven't been myself lately; I haven't been myself for almost a year. I keep acting like someone I don’t even recognize, someone who they want me to be. But I'm not that person, I'm not McDreamy, I'm just...Derek...and if there is one thing I know about Derek it’s that he loves Addison Forbes Montgomery Shepherd more than his own life and he doesn't want her to leave without him.
Addison: I can't believe you're telling me this now...
Derek: Don't go...
Addison: Stop it Derek, you have no right...
Derek: Tell me you don't love me anymore and I'll let you go, I'll let you go and I won't ever find you again.
Addison: Derek...
Derek: Say it, right now, and you'll be free...
Addison: Derek, I can't...
Derek: So you aren't keeping your promise...
Addison: Please...I can't have this conversation with you now...
Derek: You promised me that the day you realised you weren’t in love with me anymore, you would tell me and then you would leave. It seems like today is the day. So I'm standing here, looking into your perfect eyes, waiting for you to say it.
Addison: Why are you doing this to me? It hurts too much Derek...
Derek: Because you're my best friend and the love of my life and I can't stop asking myself what the hell we are doing here in Seattle, and why aren't we together, and why am i still talking when all I want to do now is kiss your lips and forget the rest of the world...
Addison walks over to him and puts her hands on his chest.
Addison: I can't keep that promise Derek, because the day you're talking about, it's not today and it's not going to come...EVER...I do still love you, I always will...

*insert your personal end, I can't, because I really don't know what the right thing for them is right now*

Thanks Claire for beta-reading!
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Old 03-21-2007, 03:00 AM
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I'm so gonna love this thread!!

I'll write some new ones later.

ETA: Bringing over the ones from the other night

Addison: What are you doing here?
Derek: You're leaving Seattle.
Addison: Yep.
Derek: You're breaking our divorce settlement.
Addison: Which one?
Derek: The one that says I get hot sex wherever whenever with you. And when Derek wants sex with Addison, Derek will get sex with Addison.
Addison: Ok. Want one now?
Derek: Yep. Shower?
Addison: Of course.
*insert shower squee*
Addison: You know you can always come visit me in LA.

******

Addison steps out of the shower in the doctors' locker room
Addison: Where the hell is my towel?
Derek: Looking for this?
Addison: What are you doing here? Give that to me.
Derek: I heard you where leaving Seattle.
Addison. Yeah. So?
Derek: So, I was thinking, we haven't christened this particular shower.
Addison: What? You're insane.
Derek: Come on. For old time sake?
Addison: Okay.

******

Addison and Derek find themselves alone in the elevator.
Derek: So, I heard you were leaving Seattle.
Addison: Yep.
Derek: Good luck. I'm gonna miss you.
Addison: I'm gonna miss you too.
Silence.
Addison: Derek? Can I ask you something?
Derek: Sure.
Addison: I really don't get what's so special about elevators. What's the deal?
Derek: Here, I'll show you.
*insert hot elevator sex*
Addison: Wow.

******

Addison: What are you doing here.
Derek: I heard the bet between you and Mark.
Addison: Yeah. So? What do you care?
Derek: I'm here to make sure you'd break it.
Addison: What? I have every intention of keeping it.
Derek: Not if I can help it.
Addison. You're insane. No! Don't take off your shirt!
Too late.
Addison: Don't you dare take off your pants, Derek. No! Don't come near me!
Derek rips Addison's blouse!
Addison: That's a $500 shirt!
Derek: Shut up.
Addison: Ok.

******

Derek and Addison are alone in the locker room.
Derek was smiling at Addison, being all dreamy.
Addison: What the heck are you doing?
Derek: I heard about the bet. Now, I'm making you want me.
Addison: Your smile won't work. I'm not Meredith.
Derek: Ok, how about this?
He took off his scrub top and flexed his muscles.
Addison: Hmmm...maybe if you could strut a little.
Derek did so.
Addison: Now, that's what I'm talking about. Come here.
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Old 03-21-2007, 07:27 AM
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You're welcome Rosy

Can't wait to read those new ones Tna
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Love, love, love this thread. Bringing over old ones plus one that´s new.

Derek: "What?"
Addison:"I´m leaving Seattle."
Derek:"Really?"
Addison:"Yep."
Derek:"Shower?"
Addison:"You bet."

****************************

Addison:"Hey! What do you think you are doing?"
Derek:"What does it look like?"
Addison:"Undressing me?"
Derek:"Exactly."
Addison:"Didn´t you hear a word I said?"
Derek:"Every single one."
Addison:"So?"
Derek:"You´re leaving Seattle."
Addison:"Exactly. I. Am. Leaving. Seattle."
Derek:"And. We. Are. Having. Sex. Now."
Addison:"Really?"
Derek:"Yes. Shower. You and me. NOW."

*********************************

Addison:"Derek....Derek....DEREK!"
Derek:"Addie."
Addison:"Could you please come here for a moment? I need to tell you something."
Derek:"I´m fishing."
Addison:"Derek."
Derek:"Want something? Come in here."
Addison:"Are you kidding me?"
Derek:"It´s just water."
Addison:"There are fish."
Derek:"They won´t attack you."
Addison:"You can´t garantuee that. Besides, they are slimy."
Derek:"Addison."
Addison:"Okay..."
Derek:"What are you doing, Addison? ADDISON!"
Addison:"I´m not coming in."
Derek:"So you´re stripping?"
Addison:"Maybe that gets you to come out?"
Derek:"We´re divorced and I´m with Meredith now. Addison, keep your bra on!"
Addison smirks and continues to undress.
...
Addison:"Woah, Derek. Control yourself."
Derek:"Shut up, Addie."
They kiss.
...
Derek:"What did you want to tell me?"
Addison:"I´m leavin Seattle."
Camera shows Derek´s shocked face.

************************************

Derek:"Could you please hand this to Dr....?"
Nurse:"Who, Dr. Shepherd?"
Derek:"Eh, what?"
Nurse:"This chart is for who?"
Derek:"Sorry. Dr....Oh come one, Addison."
Addison:"What?"
Derek:"Just eat your damn banana!"
Addison:"What do you think I´m doing?"
Derek:"Eating...just do it please."
Addison:"Am I not eating this banana?"
Derek sighs:"Yes...you do..."
Addison:"Is it bothering you?"
Derek:"No, not at all. Why?"
Addison:"You seem like it´s bothering you that I am eating this banana and I´m wondering why."
Derek:"Maybe it´s the way you´re eating the banana."
Addison:"How am I eating it?"
Derek:"Oh, come on. Don´t play dumb."
Addison:"Then how should I eat it?"
Derek:"Just in a normal way."
Addison:"What´s so unnormal about my eating a banana?"
Derek blushes and coughs when Addison swirls her tongue around the banana.
...
Derek:"You know, I got a banana in my locker."
Addison laughs.
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Kerstin!!!
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i loveee ur ficlets Kerschdiiien
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Thanks. Any prompts. I´m running out of ideas.
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OOooo!! banana one is nice!
so im making 3 different ones. one for each pairing.
**A/A**
(In on-call room)
Addison: (enters and sees alex) Karev. (sits down on the bed beside him)
Alex: Dr. Montgomery.
SILENCE
Addison: So I heard Cristina slept with her teacher
Alex: yeah. I heard you're leaving Seattle
Addison: Ever thought of having sex with a teacher?
Alex: Yeah. Ever thought of having sex before leaving Seattle?
Addison: Yeah.
(EYESEX)
Alex: You're a teacher
Addison: You're a guy
*INSERT SQUEE*

**A/M**
Addison: So. 60 days end tonight. Congratulations.
Mark: You're leaving for LA tomorrow. Congratulations.
Addison: (teasing) It's ok Mark. I can have sex with you tonight... my flight's not 'till 12.
Mark: (serious) Do you really think it was just about the sex?
Addison: (gives him a sad smile) ...no. I knew. I always knew.
---That Night after dinner or whatever in Addison's room---
*both are kissing on addison's bed*
Addison: (starts to unclasp her bra)
Mark: (stops) don't
Addison: (eyebrows up) Mark? Are you.. sure? (looks down at his pants)
Mark: (laugh. stands up, digs through her closet and gets pajamas) wear these
Addison: is this some kinky game your up to? cuz if it is, i must say that I'm surprised loose, tattered pajamas turn you on. (puts on pajamas)
Mark: (gets a loose shirt he left behind in closet and changes)
Addison: So...? What are you standing there for?
Mark: (smirks at her for about 7 more seconds) Ok, done (lays down on the bed beside her and hugs her close from the back)
Addison: And this part of the game is...?
Mark: Snuggling
Addison: ...but.. whyyy??
Mark: Because it's not just about sex.

**A/D**
Addison: May I come in? I need to get some stuff
Derek: Oh.. right. packing?
Addison: (goes in the trailer and into the bedroom) yep.
Derek: (observes her from the entrance) You left stuff
Addison: (looks up from packing) excuse me?
Derek: (approaches her) You. You left stuff in places. Sav's place. My apartment in med school. My mom's house.... So that you wouldn't have to bring stuff over in case you spent the night.
Addison: (stands up from the bed) Derek...
Derek: Maybe a part of me... never really believed we're divorced. But now. Seeing you pack ALL of your stuff. You're really leaving.
Addison: A part of me will always be with you Derek. And a part of you in me.
Derek: (tucks a strand of hair behind her ear then kisses her. He pulls aways for a minute and whispers to her lips) I'll miss you.
---That night---
Derek opens the last drawer on his bedside table and in it he finds Addison's night reading glasses. It was on top of folded clothes. He unfolded the clothes and studied it, realizing it was her favorite cotton pajamas and her high school 'Band Camp' hoodie.
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Those are really great!

Quote:
Addison: And this part of the game is...?
Mark: Snuggling
Addison: ...but.. whyyy??
Mark: Because it's not just about sex.
Awwwwwww! Cute Mark!

And the Addek one, well, you know...I'll die for something like that happening on the real show...
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Cheskie! those were great.

the addek one was bittersweet.

Rosy - give me a location and a situation and maybe i'll drum up some ficlets
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Old 03-22-2007, 07:29 AM
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Well...let me think...a location and a situation...uhm...what about "Derek finds out Alex and Addison are dating and he decides to face her in the elevator".
Could it work for you?
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Ok, Rosy, here it is.

Derek finds out Addison and Alex are dating...

Derek and Addison are alone in the elevator
Derek: I heard you're dating Karev.
Addison: And you give a damn because?
Derek: I don't. Just wanted a confirmation.
Addison. Right. If you must know, since you and Burke are doing the dating the intern thing and it seemed to be a prerequisite in the running for Chief, I figured, what the hell.
Derek: It's just so...unlike you.
Addison: Maybe you just don't know me like you used to. Like, do you know that when Alex does this thing with his tongue on my...
Derek: STOP!
Addison: Haha. You should have seen your face!
Derek: You really are Satan. So, who's better?
Addison: You've got to be kidding me... okay.... you could learn a lot from him.
Derek: WHAT?!
Derek pushes the emergency stop button.
Addison: What are you doing?
Derek: I could learn a lot, huh? I'm sure Karev doesn't know how to do this to you...
Derek places a sucking kiss on the hollow of Addison's throat, between the clavicle.
Addison: Ohhh.....
Derek: Now, who's better.
Addison: You have to prove it better than that.
Derek: Of course I will. I'm just giving you a teaser.
*insert hot elevator sex*
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Tna - I absolutely love it
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Tna it's exactly what I was thinking about! Great job!
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