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I'm hoping to have chapters two, three, and five finished by tomorrow night. I've barely even started chapter six and that one is my favorite since it is when Fresley get together with the handcuffs.
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Awwwww.... I am going to have to wait till you are done so I can read it.
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You want to read all the chapters in order, huh? That makes sense.
Here is chapter two. I'd love some feedback! I'm still fairly new to writing fan fiction.  crazysoulless - A Fresley Fan Fiction: Handcuffs & Harlequins Chapter 2 __________________
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Okay... I'll try to get my feed back cap on when I have a little time to be smart... I'm leaving the house at any minute so now isn't a great time.
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Well from what it looks like you are good at writing.
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Okay so added the chapters up to the main page.
First I would like to say that even if you weren't a friend and I didn't know where this was going I would be hanging on for updates, you have me totally hooked. Nervous little Fred deciding to throw Wesley a party is cute... with just the Fang Gang there I imagine she'll figure out what to do with herself. Chapter two is brilliant! Just brilliant! I love him trying to get the book back without admitting it was his. "Maybe I should hang on to that..." and she is totally oblivious! So 100% Fred! The description of his house had me squeeing several times.Most romantic line so far: Wesley trying for five months with tacos and cross-word puzzles and ice cream and sweet smiles to get her to make the journey downstairs.  Funniest line so far: “Oh Lordy”, Fred muttered to herself. “Well, at least its not dolphins”.  __________________
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I'm not sure if I should concentrate on the Funny chapter three or the heartbreaking chapter five today. I should probably finish chapter three since it'll make me really know where the characters are at emotionally for chapter five since the previous four chapters would be finished.
Posting on this thread has made me start looking for Fresley icons. ha ha I am using the Fresley is gentle love banner as my current desktop image. Did you notice I added them onto my sig? __________________
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Yes I did! Go for the Funny chapter It helps for sad chapters to really know what is going on, I have written funny things out of order but the Sad emotional stuff really needs more of the background... I love Fresley icons... I've made over a 100 of them! __________________
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What episodes are on that Fresley is gentle love banner? Were the last three from AHITW?
1) That Old Gang of Mine 2) Fredless 3) Waiting in the Wings 4) 5) 6) A hole in the World __________________
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4) Life of the Party
5) Smiletime __________________
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opps double post!
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Oh, yes. I remember that from Smile Time.
This is the line I liked writing the most so far: “Having someone like you”, Wesley started to say, then paused, almost sadly. “Having friends is the best gift I could have been given”. __________________
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I keep going back to that sweet "Smile Time" kiss
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It's too bad that we couldn't have gotten an entire season of Fresley before they did the Illyria storyline.
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