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Yes, it's a nice choice. I'm just always a bit nitpicky when it comes to presentation - meaning I'd put a space after ... and I wouldn't necessarily separate Vanozza to Cesare with a comma. Just about the way it looks/reads.
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Happy thoughts,
Nina
You might want to rethink marrying the lines "Kids are dead! Kids are dead!" ("Happy days are here again.").
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