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Though the writing was a bit unrealistic. Two seconds? My God, Em you're brain has such an imagination to come so fast. Faster than Naomi in the woods. I'd have written it with a full page of just
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and then Bang! And the mutual ILUS and all that.
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LOL the whole novel is just ****tly written though.
I'd have written a description of Emily touching herself for a page. I mean it wouldn't have been difficult.