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Old 11-12-2004, 01:42 PM
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Originally posted by Squeegy
I just finished reading the new chapter........ *takes a deep breath* God, I loved it... I can't stop smiling!


Absolutely! I could see them while I was reading it! Really well written! Cat, you're the best!!
I absolutely second that.
As I was reading the end I got this little flash, like *Kay* said, of feeling guilty for reading about them making out. Surprisingly, though, it dissapated almost immediately because of your skill, Java_Angel86, at writing them in the most realistic and sensitive way possible.

Not only could I see them in that last part but I really got the feeling that that is how a date between the two of them would go. All of it was so adorable and believable. I particularly liked (for whatever reason) the part where shes talking to him about Peal Jam. It was sweet.
I only wish I could say I've EVER had a date this nice. *Sigh* But that's what fantasy is for...
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