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Old 02-17-2007, 03:57 PM
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I'm not sure what the rule is about poetry posting but here are a couple of poems I wrote inspired by ths week's episode. They're from the point of view of Desmond. (the second one is what I imagine him saying to Penny )

Lost in time

In the blink of an eye
my life changed
everything I knew
everything I was
gone
I was with my love again
was it real
or a trick of the mind
life flashes before my eyes
mine and others
why am I given this knowledge?
Is it true that once the course is set it can't be altered?
all I ever wanted
was to settle down with my beloved
Is that too much to ask?
In a flash I returned
sadder but wiser
I know my place in the grand scheme of life
I have a purpose
for once in my life
I am not a coward
or a failure
are we heading for the abyss?
I pray it's not too late.


If you only knew

If you could see inside my heart
you would understand
my love is true
If you could see inside my heart
you would know
why I must say goodbye
when all I ever wanted
was to spend my life with you
If you only knew
how much I love you
how much this pains me
how this breaks my heart
this is something I must do
the most important thing I've ever done
If only you knew
I think of you always
treasure the picture
and our time together
long to make things right
my dear Penny
how I wish you knew
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