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Alpha-male stuff is not my favorite, but I made an exception with Kage. I liked that there was always some resolution before things got too far out of control.

fmaldy24

Yeah maybe he's too Alpha - I don't know - i feel the sex is a little rough and not so loving most of the time and suddenly this guy (Jamie) has never had gay sex but suddenly wants it and loves it rough and wild and hard?

Then I don't feel like they have talked much - I like my characters too talk and these two don't always feel like they do and get to know each other. (I feel like this did get better at the end of book 2 and in book 3)

And, the writing - oh man - I don't know who edited these books but the mistakes! It's grammar but also the story itself - there is so many mistakes ! It drives me insane!

Having said all that - there is something I like about it too so I will keep reading it - I don't know why but yeah there is something that I still like

Edited to add that I have now finished the first 3 books There was some sad moments in book 3 and some more typos and I wasn't sure about the ending and Jamie but overall I did like it and I'll probably read Santori?

Giotto

You are right that there aren't very muh loving sex scenes in it.. Kage had to be the tough fighter all the time.. he could have had a soft side too..

honestly.. I have noticed some mistakes too, but I guess I'm not so picky after reading so manyy fanfics

fmaldy24

Have you read Santori? Does it get better with the love scenes and the mistakes? Seriously the mistakes get to me so much - I guess I just expect better from books that are 'published' where as fan fiction is not so much as writers not 'publishing' it with a company as much. Does that make sense?

Giotto

I'm halfway through, but as I said, I barley noticed the mistakes in the other books.. so I don't know if they got better..maybe that is, because english isn't my first language..

fmaldy24

It could be that I am very picky too

I'm not sure about Santori - you'll have to tell me what you think

Giotto

it fills a bit of the gap in the last chapter of the 3rd book and goes on from there

fmaldy24

I've read on the reviews that the ending is different though so not sure I am interested or not in reading it

♥ Gale's Fragile Beauty ♥

Santori also ends on a cliffhanger. It's not as good as Kage 2 and 3, but I guess it's setting itself up for the next one.

I'm still listening to Us. I am really enjoying Jamie and Ryan...or...Um...Wes and Canning. Why do they insist on using last names as first.

fmaldy24

But Santori goes into a different story right? It doesn't stay with Kage and Jamie?

I like Jamie and Ryan as well They're great and I have no idea why boys insist on last names instead of first names usually

Giotto

I'm 60% in Santori, and it still is on Jamie and Kage.. it is a lot about business at the moment, but I don't see anybody else coming into the scene at the moment.. at least not as a couple

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Santori is still Jamie and Kage.

fmaldy24

The start of the book is Jamie and Kage I read on the forum but they said the ending was based on a different character?

Giotto

it has flashbacks to Peter in the middle, but it ends with Jamie and Kage again.. I already got me the follow up, but I couldn't wait any longer and had to start with Logan and Tate already in book two here

fmaldy24

Well maybe I'll have to read it then and see - did you like it?

What are you thinking of Logan and Tate? Book two already? You're reading them so fast


I've been looking for something new at the moment - some things just haven't been grabbing me lately so I don't know ?