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Old 12-18-2010, 02:33 PM
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Evanescence Survivor #7: Darkest Lyrics

Thanks to Nellie for coming up with this, we're starting this new survivor!

Here are the suggestions so far (but we do need more)!

1. Hunting you, I can smell you - alive
Your heart pounding in my head

2. My wounds cry for the grave
My soul cries for deliverance

3. I can't escape the twisted way you think of me.
I feel you in my dreams and I don't sleep.

4. I'll have your nightmares for you
If you sleep soundly

5. I'm dying, praying, bleeding and screaming
am I too lost to be saved

6. I lay dying
and I'm pouring crimson regret and betrayal

7. I long to be like you,
Lie cold in the ground like you.

8. Arms outstretched, awaiting me
An open embrace upon a bleeding tree

9. Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Hello I'm your mind giving you someone to talk to

10. Crawling through this world as disease flows through my veins
I look into myself, but my own heart has been changed

11. And in the end I guess I had to fall.
Always find my place among the ashes
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Old 12-18-2010, 09:53 PM
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thanks for starting the thread, not sure what counts as dark lyrics but ... one comes to mind

I know well what lies beyond my sleeping refuge
the nightmare i built my own world to escape
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Old 12-19-2010, 08:40 PM
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Plenty of dark lyrics to choose from:

-Moonlight on the soft brown earth
It leads me to where you lay

-No one seems to hear your hidden cries
You're left to face yourself alone

-I’ve become so numb without a soul my spirit sleeping somewhere cold

-Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams

-I took their smiles and I made them mine.
I sold my soul just to hide the light.

-I dream in darkness I sleep to die,
Erase the silence, erase my life

-Don't cling to me, I swear I can't fix you.
Still in the dark, can you fix me?

-Here in the darkness I know myself.
Can't break free until I let it go.

-If I cut you down to a thing I can use,
I fear there will be nothing good left of you.
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Old 12-20-2010, 05:52 AM
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A few more......how many do we need, 30?



I hate me,
For breathing without you.

Though I patiently waited, bedside, for the death of today.
I can't see your star.

We're all grieving,
Lost and bleeding.

And I bleed, I bleed,
And I breathe,
I breathe no more.

I want to die!!!
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Old 12-20-2010, 10:07 AM
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- I can hear you in a whisper,
but you can't even hear me screaming.

- Bound at every limb by my shackles of fear
Sealed with lies through so many tears

- These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

- Closing your eyes to disappear,
You pray your dreams will leave you here;
But still you wake and know the truth,
No one is there...

- Death before my eyes
Lying next to me I fear

- You're just so pretty in your pain.

- If I bleed, I'll bleed.. knowing you don't care.




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Yeah I know I took big chunks But the lyrics didn't feel complete with 1 or 2 lines of it. XD
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Old 12-20-2010, 10:50 AM
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Thanks Nellie, I think we're close to starting this now do you mind if I break some of those verses up? its just its easier, and I guess fairer as well, if we keep it to 3 or less lines an entry..then I'll get it started

Still time for more suggestions, if there are any more?
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Old 12-20-2010, 08:29 PM
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Okay, I'll edit some shorter versions Going through the song list at azlyrics.com I've just noticed how many songs I missed when I transferred my music from my old computer

- Beg my broken heart to beat

- The softly spoken words you gave me
Even in death our love goes on

- The pain that grips you
The fear that binds you
Releases life in me

- Crave my heart and it's bleeding in your hand
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Old 12-20-2010, 09:08 PM
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Just a tad more:

-Give unto me all that frightens you
I'll have your nightmares for you

-Place onto me your burden
I'll drink your deadly poison

-Show me the shadow where true meaning lies
So much more dismay in empty eyes

-I believe that dreams are sacred.
Take my darkest fears and play them
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Old 12-20-2010, 09:10 PM
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And one more from me

- Swallowed up in the sound of my screaming
Cannot cease for the fear of silent nights
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Old 12-21-2010, 02:36 PM
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Cool, looks like we're ready to rumble, but I'll leave it 24 hours for any more final suggestions before setting this up
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Old 12-23-2010, 12:31 PM
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Right, I'll have to check this list again but we have 40 so I think thats enough lets get voting!

To recap, you get two votes each round. A vote to kill a lyric and a vote to save one.



1. Hunting you, I can smell you - alive
Your heart pounding in my head

2. My wounds cry for the grave
My soul cries for deliverance

3. I can't escape the twisted way you think of me.
I feel you in my dreams and I don't sleep.

4. I'll have your nightmares for you
If you sleep soundly

5. I'm dying, praying, bleeding and screaming
am I too lost to be saved

6. I lay dying
and I'm pouring crimson regret and betrayal

7. I long to be like you,
Lie cold in the ground like you.

8. Arms outstretched, awaiting me
An open embrace upon a bleeding tree

9. Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Hello I'm your mind giving you someone to talk to

10. Crawling through this world as disease flows through my veins
I look into myself, but my own heart has been changed

11. And in the end I guess I had to fall.
Always find my place among the ashes

12. I know well what lies beyond my sleeping refuge
the nightmare i built my own world to escape

13. Moonlight on the soft brown earth
It leads me to where you lay

14. No one seems to hear your hidden cries
You're left to face yourself alone

15. I’ve become so numb without a soul my spirit sleeping somewhere cold

16. Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams

17. I took their smiles and I made them mine.
I sold my soul just to hide the light.

18. I dream in darkness I sleep to die,
Erase the silence, erase my life

19. Don't cling to me, I swear I can't fix you.
Still in the dark, can you fix me?

20. Here in the darkness I know myself.
Can't break free until I let it go.

21. If I cut you down to a thing I can use,
I fear there will be nothing good left of you.

22. I hate me,
For breathing without you.

23. Though I patiently waited, bedside, for the death of today.
I can't see your star.

24. We're all grieving,
Lost and bleeding.

25. And I bleed, I bleed,
And I breathe,
I breathe no more.

26. I want to die!!!

27. Death before my eyes
Lying next to me I fear

28. You're just so pretty in your pain.

29. If I bleed, I'll bleed.. knowing you don't care.

30. Bound at every limb by my shackles of fear
Sealed with lies through so many tears

31. These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

32. Beg my broken heart to beat

33. The softly spoken words you gave me
Even in death our love goes on

34. The pain that grips you
The fear that binds you
Releases life in me

35. Crave my heart and it's bleeding in your hand

36. Give unto me all that frightens you
I'll have your nightmares for you

37. Place onto me your burden
I'll drink your deadly poison

38. Show me the shadow where true meaning lies
So much more dismay in empty eyes

39. I believe that dreams are sacred.
Take my darkest fears and play them

40. Swallowed up in the sound of my screaming
Cannot cease for the fear of silent nights
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Old 12-23-2010, 09:29 PM
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First one is easy 4 me!

26
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Old 12-24-2010, 07:10 AM
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26. *now that I understand*
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Old 12-24-2010, 01:47 PM
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26 for me too.
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