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Old 08-05-2006, 11:50 AM
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Power Rangers: Legacy Force

In Times of Great crisis a select team of fighters is formed to defend this planet that we call home most have lost their powers, others retain them, and yet others still keep them in trusted hands in case they are needed again. These teams are known to one and all as the Power Rangers.

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YouTube - Power Ranger History

But now rising again is an evil so great even the mighty will fall......

And some legends must live again....

Episode 1: Old Acquaintances, New Friends and Worse Enemies

{zoom to NASDA}

Air Traffic control-Aqutar1 You are clear for landing.

Pilot-{watery voice} Roger.
=The ship lands and a set of stair fold out=

Billy-Good old earth its beautiful isn't it Cestra?

Cestra-...Billy....Look

Billy-Huh?.....{Squints} Is that Goldar? But it Can't be Zordan's Energy Wave!!!

Mysterious flying ape-I am not that outcast Goldar He was weak, I am The chieftain of his former tribe, Dopoix. Now get out of my way before I tear you asunder...

Billy {mind-I can't fight him.... he's to strong [gets out of the away]...

Dopoix- Good. Now you will come with me Aqutarain {grabs Cestra}

Billy- NO [forces Dopoix into a fight] Ayia ya,

Dopoix-You are fighting a battle you can not win [pushes Billy off of the stairs] be grateful I let you live this time, [a ray of light hits him in the back] ARGH WHO ARE YOU?

Eric- A Sliver Guardian who’s vacation you just ruined.

Dopoix- Here’s an IOU [fires an energy beam at Eric]
[Eric dodges and raises his right hand to his mouth and yells] QUATUM POWER.

[Eric morphs into the Quantum Ranger] You like me now metal head?


Dopoix-Less then before [fires another beam which hits Eric and sends him flying]

Eric-WOOHA [thwams onto the ground] This is is stronger then anything else I've fought...[gets up] MEGA BATTLE!!!
[as the battlizer forms he launches himself into the air and kicks Dopoix away from Cestra then jumps again and uses his blades on Dopoix who catches them puts them and holds them with one hand]

Dopoix-I have you now [begins to repeatedly blast Eric who demorphs] I'll take 0that...[grabs the Quantum morpher and crushes it in his hand] Nice meeting you "Powerless" Ranger HA HA HA, Now I have you. [takes Cestra and fly’s off with her]

Eric- Noooo.......Do I hear.....beeping? [gets up slowly and hobbles over to Billy who has just regained conciseness] Eric- Ahh your watch its...beeping?

Billy-Huh? But how...[presses a button on the watch] {suddenly the speaker crackles to life after not being used for years] Speaker-Billy is that you?

Billy-Um... Yes it is.

Speaker-Good, this is Zordon I sense that Eric Mayers, The Quantum Ranger is with you teleport the both of you to the command center right away, I have dire news.

End of Episode one

Writers Corner

Sorry that this is sort of short But I'm not Much of a typer or a writer I've been told that the format sucks and is hard to follow I'll try to im prove it as we go along.

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Old 08-06-2006, 10:10 PM
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I think it might help the format if you could skip lines between each character's lines. That would make it a little easier to read, for me at least.
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Old 08-08-2006, 06:27 AM
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Not bad, but as Catalinay said, put spaces between each character speaking, that would make it much better.
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Old 08-08-2006, 11:40 AM
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Episode 2: Great Rangers, Some bad one Liners
{zoom to the Aquabase with Capt. Mitchell briefing the Lightspeed Rangers}
Capt. Michel-...And so the Quantum Ranger retaliated and was beaten. The monster then took the Quantum Morpher and destroyed it. It then grabbed the Aquarian and flew off with her. And that’s all we know some reports say Eric disappeared in a flash of light. I want you six to go to NASDA and inves-BOOM. What the? Quick get to the Rail Rescue Bays, NOW!

Rangers- Yes, sir!

Joel Rawlings-What do you think it is Carter?

Carter Grayson-Don't know, don't care, lets go kick its butt!

Chad Lee-Your starting to sound like Joel, Carter.

Joel-And, you say that like its a bad thing.

Ryan- It is.
[Joel puts on a mad face as they get to the Rail Rescue bays]

Rangers-Lightspeed Rescue!






[They each get in their own zords and the bays surface and the Max Solarzord towing them into space]

Carter-Ready?

Other Rangers- Ready!

Carter-Ok, Launch the new Omega Zords and Engage Omega Megazord Formation.
[The megazord forms and they splash down in the water near the Aquabase]

Rangers- Thats...Imposable.....Its-

Monster-Olympus? Yes I have returned with all the power of the underworld.Thanks to evil's new leader, Muh-ha-ha-ha. [blasts the Mega zord and with that it is destroyed and all but the Omegazord 1 sinks to the bottom while carter is knocked out]

Ryan-TRY ME ON FOR SIZE!!!
Olympus-Hurmph [blasts the Max Solarzord and blows it up] And now for you Red Ranger...{zoom To command Center}

Zordon-Teleport Him here now Alpha 7!

Alpha 8- Teleporting Now!

[Carter wakes up on a table]
Carter-Where Am I? [tries to get up but is pushed back down unable to open his eyes]

???1-You need your rest, and don't worry your safe.

???2-Yeah and You'll need your rest trust me.

Eric-He's right and don’t worry your as safe as can be....But I do have some bad news and then worse news....

Carter-WHAT? WHAT IS IT!!! [still unable to open his eyes]

Eric-The other rangers...Their all either dead or dieing....and all of the morphers have been destroyed....

???3-There is still hope for the universe and all of it resides in this very room. Now open your eyes.

[Carter is able to open his eyes with difficulty]...[the room comes into view there are 4 other people in the room and...]WHOA! A FLOATING HEAD?!?!?!

[Eric turns to a middle aged man wearing glasses] Great mouths speak alike, huh?

[A robotic humanoid walks up to Carter] You are in the Command Center the last bastion of hope in the galaxy. And I am Alpha 8.

Carter-And the others?

Alpha 8-They are all former Rangers. Their names are.....

(INTRO TIME)

YouTube - Power Rangers Legacy Force

Carter- So Zordon, You said there was hope in this room, how are we going to beat things that are so powerful that they can destroy a megazord with one hit?

Zordon-With The powers of the universe combined with the powers of the morphing grid. I had sent for the Golden Power Staff before this evil came here. Luckily it did arrive but its former wielder gave his life to ensure that it did. I Then had Alpha build Morphers that access 1/8 of the morphing grid's power and the same from the staff.

Tommy-So there are 8 Rangers?

Zordon-No, only 5 now but should you find another former ranger that person will asume the six Ranger's morpher. The unused is in case of power spikes, we need the morphing grid to win this fight. Now Jason you must release the power of the staff into the 6 morphers, then we will decide who will get which morpher.

Jason-Right Zordon. [Jason grabs the golden power staff and focuses the power on the morphers and slowly the staff starts to disapear] Huh?

Zordon-Jason, Continue we must use all the power the staff has.

Jason-Ok. [he uses the rest of the power and the staff disappears]

Zordon-Now, Carter Choose a morpher and your future.

Carter-Ok....[grabs the morpher second from the left]

Zordon-Now Billy it is your turn.

Billy-For Cestra....[picks the far right morpher]

Zordon- Now Eric.

[Eric walks up and grabs the middle one]

Zordon-Tommy.

Tommy-Here again...[Takes the far left morpher]

Jason- And I get that one I guess. [grabs the remaining morpher]

Zordon-Jason, you are the Black Legacy Ranger. Your Zord is the Mecha-cralwer. Eric, you are the Yellow Legacy Ranger, Your zord is the Thunder-Cuiser. Carter You are the Blue Legacy Ranger, Your zord is the Wave-Tank . Tommy, you are the Green Legacy Ranger, Your zord is the Cyber-Drive. And Lasty Billy, the Red Legacy Ranger, Your zord is the Legacy-Jet.


End of episode 2


Writers Corner


Yup Billys the Red ranger Nice huh? Also Thanks for the help Catalinay & Drake.

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Old 08-09-2006, 02:11 PM
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Episode 3: Reprograming?

Billy-WHAT? I can't be the Red Ranger. I'm too inexperienced

Jason- Yeah, so was I when we started. You'll do fine

Zordon-Yes Billy You will make a fine Red ranger. Now our op-

Alpha-There is someone outside I'll put it on the Viewing Globe.
[everyone surrounds the Viewing globe]

Eric-Who's that?

Tommy- Its Cam let him in Alpha.

Alpha-Right!
[cam is soon inside the command center]

Cam-A floating head and a robot, Nice touches.

Tommy-Cam their real come here [takes out a laptop from his backpack] Watch this everyone. [Starts up a program and starts to speak] The history of Power Rangers...(it was HARD to hind a quick embeddable host for this)
(NOTE: this player may make it appear that your web browser is not responding just wait till the sound starts. Also this is a stream so just hit play)(if you haven’t seen most of the Power Rangers seasons watch this)
Video - Tommy's history of PR

Tommy-So you see we need your help be the sixth lega-

Alpha-He can't. His body has gone through and energy shift. He would not survive the morphing grid.

Zordon- Then he can help around the Comand Center.

Cam- I'd be glad to help but I need to know what has happened to all of those other rangers.

Zordon- They are either dead or dieing.

Cam- and what’s going on in the world?

Alpha- There is something sucking up buildings into...nothingness?

Zordon- Behold the viewing globe.


Cam-....It looks like an interdiamentonal portal...This could be bad...can this thing send a qusi-encrypeted refracted sub-space signal?(this does not exist)

Zordon-Yes.

Cam-Good, Alpha can you help me set one up and focus it on several of the portals. [a few minutes later a ray comes out of the command centers tube and hits several of the portals and come back]

Cam- this is bad...They all lead to different universes.
All-...
WEREE-WEREE-WEREE

Alpha-The alarm!
[they all go to the viewing globe]

Zordon- I don't know what that is.

Monster-Come on Zordumb send your lackeys to fight!
[The monster looks like Red Ecliptor combined with the Psycho Rangers]

Zordon- He is very powerful be careful.

Carter- Quick question...How do we morph?

Zordon-Press the lever and say "Powers of the Past Unite"

Billy- O-ok. Ready?

Other rangers-Ready!

Rangers-POWERS OF THE PAST UNITE!

Billy- Are you ready to fight monster?

Monster- Your so kind the names Phycotor, and [blasts them] YES!
(this is fight music like in the original series)
Putfile - Unite

Billy-Lets get'em.
{]Fighting text[}

Billy kicks Phycotor then Eric follows through. Phycotor is un-phased.

*Zordon- use your weapons\ Rangers- Right*

Billy calls upon the Legacy Dao


Eric calls the Legacy Ji


Jason calls the Legacy Saber


Tommy upon the Legacy Naginata


And Carter The Legacy Twin Blades

*Eric-Lets try this again...*

Phycotor charges at them but Tommy, Eric and Billy use there weapons to stun him well Jason and Carter slash at him, causing sparks to fly.

*Billy-Let put em together* Eric's weapon has Billy's and Tommy's on the outside blades and Carters on the inside bars the blades facing them and Jason's goes right through the shaft of Eric's working as the trigger. Billy takes his position at the trigger*(it looks kind of like the MMPR original combo weapon) Billy-Ready, Aim, FIRE!* and Phycotor blows up as they turn around and strike a pose.
Then Phycotor Becomes a giant.

*Billy- We need the zords!*
They come and the rangers jump in
*Billy- ok Megazord time!*

The Thunder-Cuiser and Cyber-Drive are in front of Wave-Tank and combine forming the legs and torso of the megazord, then the largest zord the Mecha-Cralwer climbs on top and forms the armor and the arms of the mega zord and lastly the Legacy-Jet flys behind as the uncompleted megazord stands up and when it does the Legacy-Jet flips it wings down and disconnects from the cockpit and connects to the back forming wings/ shoulder pads, and then at last the cockpit lands in place and connects then flips into the body taking a part of the Mecha-Cralwer to form the head, completing the Legacy Megazord.


*Billy-Lets Try not to push it to hard guys its brand new*
Phycotor reaches out with his right hand and creates a blade, and charges at the rangers.

The Legacy Megazord catches the blade and trys to hold it but a few second later it drops and does hevay damage to the Megazord it then stumbles backwards.

*Eric-We need a weapon, NOW!*

*Billy-The Legacy Howitizer Broadsword!*
The Megazord, Grabs the Cannon of the Wave-Tank and unsheaths a blade of huge saize and blocks Phycotor's second attack and repels it.

*Phycotor-HA* he replacates himself 20 time and attacks the megazord again.

*Tommy-Turbo Time?*

*Billy-Yeah*

*Rangers-LEGACY SPINOUT!*
The megazord spins in placs and insane speeds and slashes all of the replacates and defeats all but one.

*Phycotor-They won't be pleased about this....* he runs away.

The megazord strikes a pose as Phycotor retreats

{]End of fighting text[}

Cam[over the radio]- Guys get back to the Command centerWe think we know who and what our enemy is....

End of Episode 3


Writers Corner

So what did you think of the megazord? and please post if you have anything to say even if its just "hey nice job so far, keep it up!" Thank you and I hope your enjoying it so far!
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