Wow!!!!
That was amazing.
It really touched me.
Great job, it's amazing.
And what makes it more amazing is that it's true.
I agree with your teachers.
You write so beautifully, this really touched me deep.
Way to go.
Good job everybody, it's once again amazing!
And also good job Zac and Vanessa, you really inspre people.
I know that hey do not read this but I just wanted to say that