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Young Americans Fanfic #20
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Required Reading Simply Fanfic www.yafansite.cjb.net (Spanish translations) Nicky's YA Episodes New Beginnings YA Cafe (Giselle's fics) YA@ff.net Silver Oar Awards 4 YA canon episode transcripts Old thread here. Carry on with the conversations people. [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] Patty re your last comment - that's fairly true, I feel the same way. This is a discussion thread so criticism is just part of the natural process. As long as it's constructive, it's all good. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] And on that note, Orton I'm really sorry but being the spelling/grammar nazi that I am, I just have to point out to you the "your vs you're" distinction. Your is the possessive, e.g. "Your fic", "your house"; whereas You're is short for 'you are', e.g. "you're cool", "you're smelly". Please don't shoot me for nitpicking! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] I just think you get the two confused sometimes and maybe clearing it up would help your writing somewhat. [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] __________________
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Yaaay! New thread! [img]smilies/wiggle.gif[/img] *happy wiggle* Thread number 20? we rock! [img]smilies/blush.gif[/img]
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I'm glad someone agrees. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] Ta. [img]smilies/hug.gif[/img] __________________
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Hiya,
Oh sorry Patty that comment I made before wasn't about you (sorry if you thought that it was). No I just disagreed that's all after all you said it's a discussion thread so I just put my point across there. So i'm sorry if you thought that was a comment to you - which it wasn't it was just some creative critisms. Nicky I'm 16 so my grammer will tend to off (lol) Anywho a new fresh thread cool!! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] __________________
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So I can't get much work done today because the blood drive people have invaded the library, and just look, a new episode of Nicky's fic! I think I know what I'll spend the day doing - rereading! [img]smilies/lol.gif[/img]
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Hey Caty! [img]smilies/hug.gif[/img] Gracing us with your presence eh? [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img]
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What sort of project could that be Orton? [img]smilies/lol.gif[/img]
I PMed you with relevant details. __________________
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Hiya,
Thanks Nicky it is what i thought it was anyway just needed to make sure it was right. It's and IT project where we are studying chat rooms and fan forum rooms. Its a long story. Anyway Bitter... part 2 is being delayed I have too many exams at the moment so I can't finish it off. Same with Friends..... part 7 Anyhow bye Orton xxx __________________
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awwwwwwwwwww [img]smilies/frown.gif[/img] too bad Orton!!! i was really looking forward to reading the next parts. but it's real important you pass all your exams - good luck with that, i'm sure you'll be great!
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Hiya all,
Where has everyone gone??? Thanks Toria for all that. I don't want to submit the chapters and have them be weak, anyway i can't really grasp onto how to wqrite the second part of bitter 2. Okay I need to go cause My niece has picked up a piece of paper and she is eating it lol Orton xxx [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] __________________
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Aww, nieces are so cute! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] I miss mine already... *sigh*
So yeah, I haven't had much of a chance to work on SHaFD, although I have worked a little bit on it. There's a just reason behind it though, lol - I broken my nose a week ago Friday and the pain meds haven't exactly allowed me to be in my write mind. [img]smilies/spineyes.gif[/img] (heh, I'm so punny... *cough* ) But yeah, I got sick of them so I'm not taking them anymore, so hopefully I can get part one revamped here soon. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] Great to know you're a part of my little group now Orton! [img]smilies/wink.gif[/img] Anywhoodle, gotta go. Break is over and all that jazz... Laterz! __________________
~Gis~
BoyScout#6, Jahammer#291, Half-shell Roadtripper "No one is holding you back, they just enjoy seeing you fall You need to stand up, don't give in, you are not worthless." ~ To Live Is To Fight - Moon Heejun ~ |
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Hiya,
Aww.. Gis hope your nose gets better, my sister broke her nose someone banged a door of her face in school, it was actually really funny. Nieces are great mine is only 6 months (bless her) Anyway I was just lazing around and I thought I'd do some creative YA writing so I ended up finsihing part 2 of Bitter Ecstasy. yay!! So it'll be up tomorrow (she hopes) Laterzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Orton!!! Ps Yeah you're group is good Gis all the updates [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] __________________
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yay anoyther vhapter from Orton!!! yay!!!
sorry to herea about your nose Gis, i remember breaking myine when i was 11, it hurt like hell! how'd you do it? mine was an accident with a baton and ym duert partner lol not good! sorry about my bad typing, i have a baby in each hand and it's really yhard to type!!!"! __________________
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Yes, Nicky, gracing you all with my presence. [img]smilies/lol.gif[/img]
I really liked your last two episodes - the whole Pagan thing is very interesting. __________________
"Do you know how hard that is? To be able to love someone and hate them at the same time? I can't tear my eyes away from his... never could."
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