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Bass & Charlie #26: "For one thing, I almost died. You know who saved me? Monroe."
Welcome to the 26th Charlie/Monroe thread fans 1. walking with spiders 2. Musicchild 3. severalmiles 4. Lutesse 5. PerfectAngel 6. ~MelBelle~ 7. aelita 8. mariem201 9. Nici Dawson 10. - Nina - 11. Scorpio1080 12. KeepThisaSecret 13. Jasonsgurl310 14. Annie-Day10♥' 15. MrsDeanWinchester 16. soapyjoes 17. chiarrai87 18. collide 19. neon-tiger 20. hlgreenie 21. Trowells 22. lynaem 23. Charloe 24. Leelala 25. Against_all_odds 26. AllyOop 27. CandyStars121 28. Spacebabe 29. xlennie 30. priya1008 31. Charlie_Monroe fan 32. cherylleigh 33. ring of fire 34. saprater 35. k731 36. Vikram Phalange 37. IceonFire7 38. tina_falls 39. deedee86 40. Famu 41. ThereYoullBe 42. VampFan10 43. LemonSupreme 44. wildirish 45. twilightfan14 46. ILuvMyThesaurus 47. Jamieizskye 48. mlreeve1 49. RandiPandi88 50. MDRevolutionFan 51. jaqofspades 52. Romeokijai 53. RevoInfinite 54. Necropolisian 55. TexasRevoFan 56. Twisted Type 57. Undeniable 58. Wickedrum honorary shippers 1. David Lyons 2. Tracy Spiridakos 3. Ely Gould 4. Duncan Page 5. Elizabeth Mitchell 6. Ryan Hooks, afterbuzz TV 7. Megan Thomas, afterbuzz TV 8. Francesca Dugan, afterbuzz TV 9. Tracy's aunt in Winnipeg 10. Rockne O'Bannon (on probation) x
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I'm here
Also I posted the new link on the GSC page |
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Where is everybody? Why do I have to be the first to post in the new thread?
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OK, well, a very late welcome to club. LadyH is feeling unwell and won't be joining us tonight. I'm hoping anyone else saw the link on the book club DM on Twitter. Have we all read up for tonight? Here is a link back to the old thread if we need it for any reason. http://www.fanforum.com/f88/bass-cha...l#post89290020 |
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Other than that, how are you Ice? Congrats on the Penguins win. EDIT: Oh yeah, I do have short comments ready to go. |
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OK, Lemon, well, it looks like it's just you and me. My notes are also going to be super short. Do you want to go first? Oh, MD, I misunderstood and didn't realize you were ready as well. OK, well, how about Lemon, Ice and then MD. |
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I love the bones of this story. The idea of the power coming back on and Bass being reluctant to embrace the change... I liked the way he's pining for Charlie and the way he reacts to seeing her at the party. Love the idea of Charlie embracing the party as the novel event that it is (to her). Love the dance and the way things escalate quickly. I think my only complaint is the flowery descriptions and holy metaphor, Batman. As complaints go, this one is minor. Overall, it's a really fun story. Loved this angle on Charloe. |
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Whole Lotta Love - Well, I liked this one quite a bit. I love the idea of Charlie and Bass sharing a sexy dance and it overwhelming both of them. And although it's a really small thing, I love how Bass threatens the other guy dancing with Charlie. Nothing beats being able to chase off the other guy just by stating your name.
I thought the smut was pretty well handled too. And I will admit to reading it pretty fast, so I think I may have skimmed over the flowery language you mentioned, Lemon. Anyhow, I liked this one. Overall, well done. MD, you can post when you are ready. |
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Whole Lotta Love, iwilltry_tocarryon: I didn't have time to take notes as I read, so I have to do this from memory, but overall, I liked this story -- was a decent read. Bass and Charlie finally acting on their feelings is always a winning concept, and both the scenes with them dancing and the wall sex in the alley in ch2 were hot. But... I was a little put off by some of the wording -- kind of embarrassing, really. I was also a little confused about how Bass removed Charlie's dress -- IIRC he tore it off her, which, if they were in a private place might not be so bad, but how's she going to get home from that alley with no clothes? My only other complaint is that I just don't see "Whole lotta love" (unless iwilltry wasn't referring to the Led Zeppelin song (but I don't know of another version)) as being something to dance to -- I just can't see it. *shrugs* But that's just my opinion and not a real critique -- really minor -- and I might just feel differently if it were me dancing with Bass. |
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OK, well, that was pretty quick. And I'm sorry, MD. When you said no on your first post, I thought you meant that you hadn't read. So, my bad, for totally misinterpreting that*blushes*
So I was glancing through the upcoming stories and, since I usually always forget, I figured I would just put the next story up right now. It's a bit of a longer one (about 10,000 words), but it won't be due until the next club, so that gives us two full weeks. And I remember reading it and thinking it was pretty good. It's by Romeo. Moments With Charlotte by romeookijai. Published 2/11/15. Four chapters, 10,966 words. Show Chapter | Archive of Our Own Maybe we can even get her to pop in two weeks from now when we talk about it. |
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