WeBuiltThePyramids

Personally I think babies are 100% on Happy's mind, but I can't say I'm sure it's the same on Walter's end. I know he's looked at Paige in a different way both times on the show that she's looked pregnant, but I think those thoughts are more back of his mind, where it seems to be more forefront with Happy and Paige (and I think Toby, too).

It's interesting to think about, but don't write a follow up unless you genuinely want to and think it would add to the story. Reviewers demand more from omeshots all the time, and I am of the firm opinion that you don't need to add to a story unless you really feel it will benefit from that, because sometimes it can detract.

The conversations about who may or may not be thinking about having babies would be good discussion for both the Quintis and Waige threads, too.

Cyclone139

Reviewers can be so demanding, can't they! I've written long multi-chapters before (50-60k words) where the creative process was long, but satisfying and I'm as happy as I'm ever going to be with the outcome, only for someone to say they loved it, but could I write a sequel where the characters do XYZ. I'm grateful for all reviews, of course, but...

As for Happy, I'm not saying at all that she's not thinking about babies, far from it...but I'll take this to the Quintis thread.

WeBuiltThePyramids

Wrote a oneshot that takes place after 4.04 - The Best Of Both Worlds. I also finished Here To Stay today - here is a link to a general Tumblr post about the story, post completion, where you can either go to the chapter you're on on either FF.net or AO3 or read from the start.

Heidi, I think you're around 20 now.

FoxPhile

I have an 8 hour train trip coming up on Saturday.

WeBuiltThePyramids

Well you're welcome in advance for the time passing material.

FoxPhile

I'm up to 22. All nicely downloaded and ready for me to crack open once I'm settled on the train.

WeBuiltThePyramids

Nice! And there's a couple fics from Scorpling and lookingforthestars that you need to read too!

FoxPhile

Yep, I've got a few of those, too. lookingforthestars has a couple of multi-chaps that I haven't even cracked yet!

I've got everything downloaded to my pad so I can read even when I'm offline. I usually write reviews in a Word document and then copy them, so I can do that whenever I have access.

There's "WiFi" on the train - but it can be sort of sketchy.

WeBuiltThePyramids

You are gonna have such a nice train ride. I feel guilty when I don't read fics right away because I know the authors want feedback as much as I do, but part of me is jealous of people who end up with a day of reading.

WeBuiltThePyramids

I'm trying to write. I've just fallen into this perpetual state of exhaustion again. And that sucks because I HAVE SO MUCH TO WORK ON.

Cyclone139

I wrote this after we were talking about Richard Elia on the other thread, Nicole. It came out slightly longer than I anticipated, but I hope you like it.

Daddy Says

(Also on AO3 - Daddy Says)

WeBuiltThePyramids

I will check it out! Probably Monday, I had a really late night today at work and again tomorrow, and I don't like reading fic when I'm tired because I can't devote my brain to it like I feel I should.

Cyclone139

Thank you. I'm sorry you have to work all weekend, I used to do the same until quite recently so I know what it's like.

And thank you to everyone who has reviewed it so far, I can't reply to the guest reviewers on ff.net to thank them personally.

WriterFreak001

If you haven't started reading this AU, "Waiging War" by ScorplingInTraining yet, you need to. It's so goood.

WeBuiltThePyramids

I actually haven't! I need more focus to read AUs so I can follow it and so I've been waiting until I can really sit down with it.