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yea, I agree with Chris, you should write a mini review.
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I read it whilst I couldn't sleep last night and it was a decent plot for a short story, but the writing was beyond awful. "His form wavered" a form does not waver and it was very cliche too, I remember something about sticky air curling her hair. My eyes rolled quite a bit. Also, she didn't quite pinpoint their dialogue either.
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Oh....I have no idea what to comment. I didn't notice that stuff.
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Thanks for sharing it... __________________
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oh...stuff like that doesn't usually take me out of a whole story
I focus on plot more or whether or not character actions annoy me. __________________
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a real oldie...
oh love, it is fresh and green, my love how quickly we forget the sting, my love what a pretty and dangerous line, my love what bitter yet delicious wine, my love x __________________
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Awesome...
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Devil's Carnival had a lot of songs that remind me of SH.
eta: can aurora x hook be added as a tag to the thread? __________________
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Have added the tag, Vic...
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thank you
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