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No, it's more fun that way. So far just an attraction and a bit of flirting but no lines have been crossed. Yet. And apparently we can't keep them off each other if they've already kissed a billion times.
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"Bash," she sputtered, a blush staining her cheeks. It was as if he knew she had been at the window, daydreaming of meeting him here. Never daring to believe he'd catch her within those daydreams. "Now I know you are teasing me." __________________
"I want you to look at me...and realize that what we have is so much more incredible than some passing physical attraction."
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I need more info on when it's set then. Pre F/M marriage was them being together in a relationship. What has/hasn't happened?
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The early episodes, shortly after the second episode. So the Mash relationship has been set up and there's that hint of something more.
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"Like you, I quite like mud underfoot," he smiled, "In the castle, I am not quite myself." __________________
"I want you to look at me...and realize that what we have is so much more incredible than some passing physical attraction."
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“God created me an outdoors man,” he smirked, “Though air fills my lungs inside, it’s quite different being free.” Mary knew he was adequately accurate, you could get the same rations outside as you could indoors, but not freedom. Freedom was something of a luxury to her and a way of life for him. His passing by had not been happen chance and she knew deep in the pit of her stomach, that her desire for the grounds was not in aid of fresh air. However, air was something she currently felt short of in his presence. |
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Jade, you have a good voice for this period stuff, I like it.
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Mary felt the heat of his gaze as she gathered her wits once again. She met his eyes, burned by their intensity. Her stomach fluttered so she pressed her hand over it to ease the feeling, "Yes, I would imagine so." __________________
"I want you to look at me...and realize that what we have is so much more incredible than some passing physical attraction."
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I can't telling your being sarcastic! I suck don't i? Gah!
Mary's eyes fluttered around the land ahead, there was a small pond that could be mistaken for a puddle. Beside it stood Stirling, bold and bright. She approached the pond, horror struck. It was full of weeds and the water had green moss tainting it's surface. She turned her gaze to Stirling and found that his paws were sodden with mud. "Oh Stirling," she gasped. |
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I wasn't being sarcastic, I do like your writing.
Stirling, it has been too long. --- Quote:
Bash did not know whether to pry the dog off her or laugh. Mary did not seem distressed so he chose the latter. "It seems your dog does not know that he's no longer a puppy." __________________
"I want you to look at me...and realize that what we have is so much more incredible than some passing physical attraction."
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Aww thank you Nic! I aspire to be as good as you one day!
"Pup or naught, look at my dress," she shrieked fighting for what dignity she had left. "Mud becomes you," he smirked with his eyes closed. "Oh is that so?" She asked cheekily, scooping up mud with her fingertips and flicking it at him. At first she had merely been aiming for him, but it fragmented in the wind and sprayed up his face. She watched as Sebastian paused, her shocked intake of breath causing him to slowly open his eyes. "Forgive me," she recoiled getting ready to run. |
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Aww thanks. I don't like my writing either, it's the curse of being a writer, I think.
And lordie, Mash are so cute. --- Quote:
Fear and exhilaration pumped through her veins, causing her breath to hitch as she waited, "Forgive me," she whispered again. He swiped a streak of mud from his face and streaked it across her cheek, "Now we are even." __________________
"I want you to look at me...and realize that what we have is so much more incredible than some passing physical attraction."
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Mary flinched under his lingering touch and then their eyes connected. The laboured touch of his skin on hers was magnified by the humidity surrounding them. She noticed her head leaning slightly in towards him, his lips pulling her eyes in like a magnetic field. She slowly moved her head back so that he wouldn't notice and then wiped her cheek on his. Her mud getting caught in his stubble.
Sebastian's grip loosened and Mary broke free. He thought she was going to head but him. He soon regretted it, for she was escaping him. Wild and free. |
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I think head butting occurs at least once per story.
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Muddied skirts and unruly curls flew behind her. The girls would not let her hear the end of this...rolling about in the mud like a wild thing. Oh but it had felt good to play with Stirling as she used to at the convent. And Bash had not recoiled from her unladylike behavior. In fact, he had seemed inspired by it. __________________
"I want you to look at me...and realize that what we have is so much more incredible than some passing physical attraction."
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^ OH MY this post is good Nic!!! I love it.
Sorry for not partaking, I'm just not feeling like it. Hope my Mash mojo comes back someday. __________________
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Hope my next attempt doesn't disappoint. Didn't think I'd do another but you guys inspired me again and I thought of some show stuff to reference and criticize, so that was fun. I still feel like an interloper and am hesitant to interrupt wistfuldreamer and sourburst who have such a great back-and-forth rapport. But now that they're sleeping... shh... maybe I'll sneak in. (Um, not sneaking into their rooms though. I'll leave that to Bash. ) Sorry I don't know how to quote the whole fic, so I'm just replying to the most recent post! For some reason, it doesn't include the part she quoted... Oh, and I'm sorry I couldn't make it shorter but maybe my less frequent posts balance it out? Quote:
"Yes, come in." Graceful and ladylike, she turned, then jumped at the sight of Sebastian, standing in her doorway. How bold to visit her bedchamber, yet he seemed hesitant to enter. Heart pounding, she walked towards him, wondering at his unusually serious expression. "No guards? I had thought, after... Although I am glad to avoid the dungeons this evening, I would rest easy there, knowing you had such vigilant protectors." Bash spoke lightly, but his eyes burned with outrage, and Mary knew he was thinking of Colin's recent attack. No one, not even her Ladies, not even Francis, had shown such concern - for her reputation and for the alliance, yes, but not for her. "Nevermind, Your Grace. Here's a friend to stand guard." With a smile he opened the door wider to reveal Stirling, waiting in the hall. Finally entering the room, Sebastian let go the leash, which Mary now realized he had sneakily hidden behind him, and Stirling ran to greet her as if they had been parted for years. "Oh, how could I have forgotten him?" Mary hid her face in the dog's mane. True, she had been distracted by Bash, and his lips... "Yes, how could you run away like that, and with no goodbye kiss?" Mary looked up in shock at his apparent mindreading. Bash winked at her. "Stirling was disappointed." Last edited by crispy; 08-07-2014 at 06:40 AM |
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^ Your post confused me, did you start a new one? They're having a mud fight in the gardens? I shall continue from Nic's post, is that okay? Can we save yours for the next one? It sounds saucy! That way we can do the garden one (continuing from the last smutt one) and then we can do your bedroom one.
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Arms were bent, heads were bumped and shoulders were grazed. Sebastian rolled off of Mary’s back in a terror, but before he could offer his apologies he could hear Mary’s chortling muffled by the ground. She too rolled onto her back and her pleasant laughing warmed his heart. “Oh Bash,” she snorted, “I do not remember the last time I was filled with such joyfulness.” |
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