LWS53

I would love to know Pacey's thoughts on being touched up while Joey thought he was asleep.

JJH85

Al right, I will write Pacey's POV. I will post the link once I have finished it.

JJH85

Pacey's POV is complete and added to the story. It may take a couple of hours for it to actually appear, but I will keep watch and let you know when I see it.

LWS53

Thanks! I look forward to reading it.

JJH85

I think the updated story is there now.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1153296...ld-Within-Edit

escapism

That was a fun read. It was great how you mirrored everything in their POVs

LWS53

I will read this when things get quiet.

JJH85

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. It's rough and there are some things that I could definitely improve upon for sure, but it's only my second attempt at writing, so I didn't get too fussy since it was such a short story. Plus you end up finding little errors even after re-reading it a couple of times.

LWS53

Thanks for the story Justyne, I remember the episode it was based on, a fun episode.

JJH85

I hope you enjoyed it.

LWS53

Yeah it was good, and more realistic for these two characters than going any further would have been.

JJH85

Thanks, that is what I was thinking too when I thought up the story.

Caledon

Read your latest fic Justyne, good effort and sorry it took so long...very weird and busy week to blame but I hope you keep writing.

JJH85

Thanks and thanks for reading it. I would like to change some of the wording as it very amateurish, but once I posted it, I lost the desire to re-work it.

JJH85

I loaded another Fan Fic onto Fanfiction.net today. Here is the link if anyone is interested in reading it.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1289180...-Winter-s-Tale