Ed Westwick - Fanfiction # 59: Because 'B' won't be off the hook for long. - Page 2

**Kiss of Death** · 10-31-2009, 10:12 AM

*SQUEAL* Carter!!!!!

OMG OMG OMG! *SQUEAL*

Read and reviewed!

**TheMusicLives** · 10-31-2009, 10:40 AM

-looks at title-

OH... crap...

CarterT · 10-31-2009, 10:43 AM

Better 'B' than 'CT', I guess.

...Don't look at me strange. I have to write at least 50,000 words next month!

Lol, some dumb bitch complained about the story and I just sent a scathing reply back. Okay, maybe not scathing but I basically said "Shut the **** up, it's my story and I know what the **** I'm doing with it. Don't you dare tell me what is right and wrong."

~CT

**Kiss of Death** · 10-31-2009, 10:56 AM

Yeah, B, Issa called you flat out!

ECK! On your latest update, Carter?

CarterT · 10-31-2009, 10:58 AM

Yup. I didn't let them off the hook easy though. I still think I should have been more evil.

Someone has never been towards the end of pregnancy before. And thinks Serena is only a one-dimensional character.

I'm keeping it to mock publicly though.

~CT

**Kiss of Death** · 10-31-2009, 11:01 AM

omg, Carter, I just read the review. I was talking with Catheryne on Thursday and it's the SAME reviewer who tore Nes' latest fic apart.

It's something with this bitch, not the writers.

Seriously, she needs to WRITE HER OWN **** and not tell other writers how to write THEIR stories.

Excuse the language.

CarterT · 10-31-2009, 11:12 AM

Don't worry, I added a little snappish thing at the end of my chapter too. That's why, if you're seeing so many deleted/edited and the chapter coming and going, that's me. I'm trying to add my snark in there. I'm so evil but I think I should be eviler

Here's what I put at the end by the way. Hopefully, it shows up in the chapter. Well, some parts edited:

And to the person complaining about the story: Uh, yes, they will love each other but you forgot that BLAIR IS FREAKING PREGNANT! More specifically, she's almost at the end of this pregnancy! How they hell can they be all passionate and having sex when she's pregnant? And if you're that worried about lack of love, trust me, they love each other. The sweet moments between them will come. In case you didn't notice, I'm only on chapter six. Who knows how long this story will last?

Furthermore, Serena is not as one-dimensional as you think she is. She notices things too. Whether or not she reacts is another thing. I believe that with Nate too. Pretty, sometimes clueless yes, but not as stupid as you think. And deep down, I truly believe she cares about everyone. So if you're not into her character, that's one thing. To tell me to write her as something different...no, not doing it. I don't mind criticism but telling me what I should and shouldn't put in my story is where I draw the line.

~ ~ ~

My original reply was far meaner. Originally I called her a titmouse.

~CT

**issa** · 10-31-2009, 11:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheMusicLives (View Post)

-looks at title-

OH... crap...

You can run, but you can't hide!

**Kiss of Death** · 10-31-2009, 11:53 AM

Beautiful, Carter. I love your words.

CarterT · 10-31-2009, 12:43 PM

...Lol, I have more to say but I'm going to let her off easy...for now.

Besides, if I was screwing up characterization, Dawn would tell me in a heartbeat. And I trust my beta far more than I will trust a reviewer who hasn't been following the story the whole way through and just dropped a review now.

~CT

**Kiss of Death** · 10-31-2009, 01:06 PM

*nods* Good. One reviewer who tells you how to write means nothing.

amomentintime3 · 10-31-2009, 03:03 PM

I'm in hiding from well wishers.......beneath the sofa....(no i'm not drunk (YET))

catheryne82 · 10-31-2009, 03:50 PM

lol, Carter, glad to see how you're handling the little giril

I always keep replying to her on the part then I keep removing it before Ipublish just because I didn't want other people to see me being mean. So I just sent her a note and told her to stop reading and write her own story.

All the stuff I deleted have been meaner (in my estimation) but I didn't want to have to subject the other readers to the awful little girl who seems to think I'm a slave who will write out plots she's got stuck in her head that she is too lazy to put into words *g*

Ok. Now. I'm done.

CarterT · 10-31-2009, 06:29 PM

It's beautiful; one of my reviewers defended me against that twat too! I love it!

~CT

**TheMusicLives** · 10-31-2009, 07:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by issa (View Post)

You can run, but you can't hide!

Yes I cannnnnnnnnnn!