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Alias Fanfic: Don't Look Back
This fan fic inspired by Alias not about it.
Main Character: Riley Alexia McKayden (Ri, Alex,lexi, k) Introduction: The Future. An unpredictable awaited life we all look forward to. Riley, a do antyhing and everything field agent puts her life on the line to save people steal things and kill people. Trained assasin, prgramed genious. Sure the future has faster cars, smaller cell phones and more intelligent technology more dextrcutive weapons but life didn't get any easier or change nor did the people living them. The world is in a different is a different state now. Everything is busier than New York tenfold. People are more distant and defense is the key issue. Programmed by conditioning in her youth Riley became a programmed agent, but her mind got in the way of her duty. Chapter 1 (Riley) Damp and cold. Dark and empty. I sat there with brick surrounding me. The onley opening wa s a metal door. It could have been a padded room for crazy people and maybe that could have been better, but it wasn't. I actually kind of liked it though, it gave me planty of time to think, i suppose that's why im doing that now . I never really saw anyone, well that is except the robot that gave me my meals. I hadn't seen day light in 100 notches or more according to the marks on my bed rail. I just would hope that i calculated them right though, the robot that i called george would come in and give me brown slop and purified milk but then later he would give me brown slop and fruit extracts(juice). so i would notch after every fruit extract meal i got. Though my mind could fool me at times. Im not sure anymore. heck i don't even know why i called the robot a he or gave it the name george. I mean it has the face of a he yet there was some aspects that it could be both male or female, and i guess that's how they want robots feeding innocent prisoners right? I just liked the name george reminded me of when i could actually see the yellow sphere( the sun) If i just pulled the trigger i wouldn't be here. I don't know where i would be, Maybe i could have retired, but im to young, and they need me, but still, day in adn day out it gets to a point where alll you want to do is quit. maybe i would have morried ya never know. I wonder what brad's doing. I wonder if he's married. why am i talking to myself? Oh yeah that's right im stuck in this cell and have no1 else to talk to. Maybe that's a good thing. Maybe..... (Falls to sleep has a dream that is really a moment of her past) Riley: Dady why do i have to pack my bags? Dad: Because your going to go to "school" for a long time Rilery: but daddy, I don't wanna. i don't wanna you can't make me (Throws emma her dooly on the floor, folds her arms and scowls) Momy! tell dady that i don't have to go cause im only dis many (holds up 5 fingers) Mom: (her eyes water up) but baby darling, you have to go to "school" to learn new things Riley: BUT I WANNA PLAY WITH JESSE!!! Mom: you'll probably see him thre now get your things Riley: OK fine (stomps off) Mom to Dad: why do they have to take her Sam? Dad: They chose her there's nothing that we can do i mean if we don't make her go they'll come and take her Mom: (cries on dad's shoulder) <Both hear Riley come back down stairs> Riley: IM ReADY!! Mom: (tries to act compose) Dad: don't forget ur dolly...... Chap 2 Coming Soon |
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Joined: Apr 2001
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[img]smilies/wave.gif[/img] Welcome to FF and the fanfic board SydneyW. We actually have an Alias thread open already, so I'm going to close this thread because it's a duplicate. Could you please repost your story at the Alias fic thread? Sorry for the inconvenience.
Conversely, seeing that your fic isn't actually about Alias, you can also consider posting it at the Original Fiction thread instead. [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img] __________________
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