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Blind Deceit [Original, PG-13/15-ish]
(aka Blindfold initially if you guys follow my LJ)
Plot: Ten years ago, a boy is taken under the wing of a mage on the run. A young princess becomes the heir to take the throne. Years later, a forbidden love unravels and secrets long kept puts their trust with each other and their country in jeopardy. No matter how close one may be with another, things are not what they truly seem to be. After a bit much of hesitation, I decided to make this story that I'm working on more public. However, due to the fact that each chapter tends to run from 1,000 to 5,000+ words per chapter, I decided to put an excerpt/quote from each chapter and link you to said chapter. Although more than one chapter has been up in both my FP and LJ accounts, if you guys have me as a friend on LiveJournal, the chapters are usually update much faster and frequent than I do on my FictionPress. Still, would definitely love to hear any form of feedback Though I have to add this: If you are a friend of mine on LJ and have followed the story, please leave your comments on future chapters on my LJ rather than here to avoid spoilers (the one on my FictionPress is open for anyone to read but the on my LJ is for "Friend's Only") Why PG-13/15-ish? There are chapters where things get insanely brutal. And there are those chapters that might mind boggle the young ones rather than those in a somewhat older age level. Prologue [Link] Quote:
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for the own thread
I added it to the Board Guide as well. __________________
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IA Dave I'm intrigued about the rest of the story.
Maybe you could friend me on LJ, Yamiko. my u/n there is zacsgirll __________________
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Didn't think this thread would be updated
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Right now, I'm (somewhat) working on the new chapter since a previous one had burned me out. The first 19 chapters are on my Fiction Press but most of the rest is on my LJ. Not sure if I'll keep updating on my Fiction Press (I only update there for those who don't have an LJ account) Here's some excerpts from the next three chapters. Chapter 1: (Link) Quote:
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thanks!
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you updated!
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But the chapters in question (or at least for Fiction Press) have been up for quite a long time. |
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Just to let you guys know, I am still writing after a few weeks hiatus (the last chapter I wrote really worn me out).
So just a small update: I have four chapters left, bringing a total of 31 chapters (including prologue and epilogue) to the story. Yeah, really long. I'm not sure if I will keep updating my Fiction Press account simply for the sake of protecting my story. If you guys have a LiveJournal account, let me know if you want to add me (It's friend-locked, including the stories). The first 21 chapters are on my Fiction Press but it's most likely I'll be updating on my LJ. I won't be posting the chapters here for personal reasons but I guess if you guys are interested, I could mass-PM you the chapters. Chapter 4 [Link] Quote:
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31 chapters?
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I'm a sucker for writing long stories. Short stories are fine but not a lot of character development. |
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That's true. You can definitely move your characters along when the work is longer
I'm super impressed that you've stuck with it that long __________________
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sounds like you have something in mind already. that's great!
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