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Old 12-25-2004, 07:28 PM
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Old 12-30-2004, 02:09 AM
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I've updated Home.

Chapter Eight

Edited to add:

I posted a new story at ff.net. It's RoryLogan.

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Old 01-14-2005, 11:08 PM
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Okay, so I've been writing this Rory/Finn fic off and on for awhile now (their my season 5 UC couple, I think). Would anyone be interested in beta-ing it?
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Old 01-22-2005, 11:46 AM
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Hey, I'm totaly new to this site, and I wrote a pretty funny fanfic about the Gilmores and Bon Jovi (main pairings are Lorelai/Jon, Rory/Dean/Jess and more).
Please check it out and tell me what you think
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Old 01-22-2005, 01:52 PM
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Welcome snow5183. I quite enjoyed your story so far. I think you've got some funny and on-character dialogue going there, especially the 'repetitive-redundant-repetitive-redundant' thing, and you got me giggling at Michel's good characterisation.

However, if you don't mind, I would also like to suggest that you run the story through a spell-checker and perhaps a beta-reader, because there are some obvious spelling errors and that detracts from the appreciation of the good dialogue. (Incidentally, the 'correct' way to spell GG!Lorelai is Lorelai, not Lorely.)

I know this is central to your plot, but I also can't help wondering whether Lane, as a character, would freak out over Bon Jovi coming to town. Given her manic obsession with classic hard rockers/punks, I actually have trouble visualising a Lane that really idolised Bon Jovi because they don't really seem her type.

You might also be interested to know that in conventional script-format writing, the characters' names are written in capitals. So it would go something like this:
LORELAI: You're repetitive.
RORY: And redundant.
I'm less sure about character action (i.e. not dialogue), but I think they are written in italics.

Good luck with your story! I look forward to it being updated.
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Old 01-23-2005, 09:25 AM
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Thanks for the comments... :)

Everything you said was very helpfull and taken into acount. I haven't found anyone to beta-read this story, but I've done some spellcheking and a few modifications, and also added another chapter...
About Lane, it's not that she's over-excited about Bon Jovi as a band, but more about the fact that she's going to play in a *real* rock-band concert, with lots of people watching.
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Old 01-23-2005, 04:37 PM
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I enjoyed the update. It's cool that you write so fast. I also like how you had links to all the chapters on the homepage now, makes navigation easier.

I really like the changes you made to formatting. It makes it a lot easier to read, in my opinion. Although, when I was saying how character names are in caps, I didn't mean it should be the case in the dialogue as well. It should be something like:
CHRIS: Be nice, Lorelai.
RORY: Ohhh, did you noticed the way Richie was looking at her the entire concert?

And I think Chris's girlfriend/wife is Sherry, not Cherry.

Keep up the good work!
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Old 01-24-2005, 02:02 AM
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Hi, I'm also new to this thread and I like very much this show (maybe too much)!

My fanfics can be found here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/709369/

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Old 01-24-2005, 03:12 AM
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Welcome Lands!
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Old 01-26-2005, 08:38 AM
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Another newbie!

I just wrote and posted my first Gilmore Girls fanfic, Circular Reasoning, and I'd welcome any feedback, comments, or criticisms anyone has. Thanks!
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Old 01-26-2005, 02:57 PM
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Welcome freelancerrh! I really enjoyed your story. You write very well, and I thought the bantery dialogue was great. The scene in the end when you described Luke's presence in the house was excellent.

And I absolutely loved that you didn't rush anything in terms of storyline. Things just happened, very naturally, and there were no big tear-filled kissing scenes or 'complete' happily-ever-afters, but there was a big sense of hope and the possibility of things that could happen in the future. It was great.
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Old 01-27-2005, 11:47 AM
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Hi Guys!

I want to post the Link to my absolute favorite FanFic, it's a Literati One Shot, and the Autor is my favorite FanFic Writer. Maybe he/her is also browsing around FanForum

It would be great if you would read it, you won't regret, i promise! It's something very special and truly magical.

Oh, and before i forget it, the rating is R-16

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1855339/1/

Tell me if it impressed you as myself!

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Old 01-28-2005, 04:46 AM
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Silversun, wow! Thanks so much for the feedback. It's some of the kindest I've gotten. I'm glad you liked my open ending. I'm not much for grand gestures and sappy, happy endings - I think it's in reaction to how many of them I've read (and, I admit it, wrote in my self-involved teenage years). So thanks again!
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Old 01-28-2005, 05:00 AM
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freelancerrh - you're welcome, and I can't agree more about the whole teenagery happy sappiness. I look forward to more GG fics from you, should you decide to write them.

Thanks for the link louisvuitton!
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Old 01-30-2005, 07:21 AM
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Here is the Link to both of my FanFics, both are on german!

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/701627/

One of them is very funny a bit JavaJunkie but mostly Rory/Jess and one of the Gilmore Girls is pregnant! And the second is very dark, a Literat Road Trip. I wrote it because i love Literati Road Trip Fics and there was no good on german!

Hope someone will read it or maybe just take a look at it.

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