Gilmore Girls Fics #2
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I've updated Home.
Chapter Eight Edited to add: I posted a new story at ff.net. It's RoryLogan. Fade to Color |
Okay, so I've been writing this Rory/Finn fic off and on for awhile now (their my season 5 UC couple, I think). Would anyone be interested in beta-ing it?
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Hey, I'm totaly new to this site, and I wrote a pretty funny fanfic about the Gilmores and Bon Jovi (main pairings are Lorelai/Jon, Rory/Dean/Jess and more).
Please check it out and tell me what you think :) http://www.geocities.com/snow5183/Home.html |
:wave: Welcome snow5183. I quite enjoyed your story so far. I think you've got some funny and on-character dialogue going there, especially the 'repetitive-redundant-repetitive-redundant' thing, and you got me giggling at Michel's good characterisation. :lol:
However, if you don't mind, I would also like to suggest that you run the story through a spell-checker and perhaps a beta-reader, because there are some obvious spelling errors and that detracts from the appreciation of the good dialogue. (Incidentally, the 'correct' way to spell GG!Lorelai is Lorelai, not Lorely.) I know this is central to your plot, but I also can't help wondering whether Lane, as a character, would freak out over Bon Jovi coming to town. Given her manic obsession with classic hard rockers/punks, I actually have trouble visualising a Lane that really idolised Bon Jovi because they don't really seem her type. You might also be interested to know that in conventional script-format writing, the characters' names are written in capitals. So it would go something like this: LORELAI: You're repetitive. RORY: And redundant. I'm less sure about character action (i.e. not dialogue), but I think they are written in italics. Good luck with your story! I look forward to it being updated. :) |
Thanks for the comments... :)
Everything you said was very helpfull and taken into acount. I haven't found anyone to beta-read this story, but I've done some spellcheking and a few modifications, and also added another chapter...
About Lane, it's not that she's over-excited about Bon Jovi as a band, but more about the fact that she's going to play in a *real* rock-band concert, with lots of people watching. Enjoy :) |
I enjoyed the update. It's cool that you write so fast. I also like how you had links to all the chapters on the homepage now, makes navigation easier.
I really like the changes you made to formatting. It makes it a lot easier to read, in my opinion. Although, when I was saying how character names are in caps, I didn't mean it should be the case in the dialogue as well. It should be something like: CHRIS: Be nice, Lorelai. RORY: Ohhh, did you noticed the way Richie was looking at her the entire concert? And I think Chris's girlfriend/wife is Sherry, not Cherry. ;) Keep up the good work! |
Hi, I'm also new to this thread and I like very much this show (maybe too much)!
My fanfics can be found here: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/709369/ Luke |
:wave: Welcome Lands! :)
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Another newbie!
I just wrote and posted my first Gilmore Girls fanfic, Circular Reasoning, and I'd welcome any feedback, comments, or criticisms anyone has. Thanks! |
:wave: Welcome freelancerrh! I really enjoyed your story. You write very well, and I thought the bantery dialogue was great. The scene in the end when you described Luke's presence in the house was excellent.
And I absolutely loved that you didn't rush anything in terms of storyline. Things just happened, very naturally, and there were no big tear-filled kissing scenes or 'complete' happily-ever-afters, but there was a big sense of hope and the possibility of things that could happen in the future. It was great. |
Hi Guys!
I want to post the Link to my absolute favorite FanFic, it's a Literati One Shot, and the Autor is my favorite FanFic Writer. Maybe he/her is also browsing around FanForum It would be great if you would read it, you won't regret, i promise! It's something very special and truly magical. Oh, and before i forget it, the rating is R-16 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1855339/1/ Tell me if it impressed you as myself! kiss kiss kiss |
Silversun, wow! Thanks so much for the feedback. It's some of the kindest I've gotten. I'm glad you liked my open ending. I'm not much for grand gestures and sappy, happy endings - I think it's in reaction to how many of them I've read (and, I admit it, wrote in my self-involved teenage years). So thanks again!
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freelancerrh - you're welcome, and I can't agree more about the whole teenagery happy sappiness. :D I look forward to more GG fics from you, should you decide to write them. :)
Thanks for the link louisvuitton! |
Here is the Link to both of my FanFics, both are on german!
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/701627/ One of them is very funny a bit JavaJunkie but mostly Rory/Jess and one of the Gilmore Girls is pregnant! And the second is very dark, a Literat Road Trip. I wrote it because i love Literati Road Trip Fics and there was no good on german! Hope someone will read it or maybe just take a look at it. kiss kiss kiss |
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