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DanBoozerBoone2006

I did a quick search to see if you guys had an official Fan Fic Thread and I didnt see anything...I wrote these maybe 2 years ago, and Im really proud of them. I spent HOURS on each one and they really mean alot to me. They are
Season 8: A Brave New World. I have done 6 episodes so far...I'd like to know if you guys want more. PLEASE post them elsewhere and pass them on to other people, I want as much feedback as I can get. I hope to write more of these, and a little encouragment sure would help lol... However If you do repost it, please give me peoples reactions, and Give Credit To Dan "Boozer2006 Boone" Cowgill....They might be a little hard to read on the forums so you might wanna copy paste it into MS Word...
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Season 8 Episode 1: A Crazy New World

(Cory Shawn Topanga and Eric are in Times Square)
Cory (to Topanga)- Well Honey we are finally here
Eric: Yeah the Big Peach
Topanga: Don't you mean Big Apple?
Eric: No sis I said what I said
Shawn: Alright guys I know that we are here in NY but this doesnt feel like home
Cory: We've been here for an Hour how do you expect it to feel?
Topanga: Well lets go check into a hotel so we have a place to stay tonight.

(Opening song/video)

(Hotel Lobby)
(Topanga talking to lady at desk)- Hi, I would like to check in.
Lady- Name Please?
Topanga- The name is Mathews
Lady- Um I dont see any reservations for Mathews.
Topanga- Maybe I said Lawerence?
Lady- No, I'm sorry nothing

Topanga (adressing Cory Shawn and Eric)- Guys we have no place to stay tonight!
Cory- I thought you made reservations before we left?
Topanga- I did but I dont know
Shawn- Well I'm used to this so (takes out pillow and lies down on the floor)
Eric- Hey Cor?
Cory- Yeah
Eric- If Mr. Feeny were here he'd know what to do.
Cory- But hes not here thats the thing!
Eric- If I have to sleep outside im sharing a sleeping bag with your wife!
Cory- Hey Eric, why dont you try to do somthing for yourself for once?
Topanga- Both of you shut up! Eric go over to the souvenier stand while I talk to Cory (to cory)- Okay we can't get an apartment this late at night, and the hotel is booked now we have to stay outs...
Voice- You can all stay with me
Shawn- Jack!?!
Jack- Shawn?
Shawn- I thought you would be half way to Zimbabwe by now!
Jack- Well our plane stopped in NY to get ready to go over the ocean and Rachel saw her old boyfriend, so instead of going by myself I called my step-dad to ask him what I should do.
(Eric Walks Back to the group with a statue of liberty hat thing on)
Eric- Alright guys I have an Idea. We could dress up as cats and sleep on the stage on Broadway.
Jack- One day away from him and he gets stupider.
Eric- JACK!!! Hey buddy, did you already bring peace to the world?
Jack- Shut up...anyway I talked to my dad and...hes gunna give me the money I need to live on and start my own buisness!
Topanga- Congratulations
Shawn- Jack heres lesson #1. No matter what you do, dont go into any buisness that dad was in!
Jack- Why would I want to start a Plastic Sheep decoration buisness?
Shawn- Hey that was my Idea!
Jack- Alright i have a room rented here for 3 days so we can all get ourselve on our feet.

Commercial

(Into huge fancy hotel room where Cory and Topanga are in one bed and Eric is in the other)

Cory- We finally made it here.
Topanga- And I still love you
(They kiss)
Eric- HEY IM TRYING TO SLEEP OVER HERE!!

(Jack and Shawns room)
Jack-This is pretty nice huh?
Shawn- Jack, when you first came here I didnt like you. I hated you. but now...(Jacks cell phone rings)
(Screen splits, we see Rachel on the Phone)
Rachel: Jack I'm soo sorry I left you but now I'm here in Boston and I'm moving out to L.A. tomarrow with my ex-boyfriend.
Jack: Well I'm very happy for you
Rachel: Jack I know you liked me since the day I moved in but, we tried that! It didn't work. Now you need to move on!
Jack: Rachel I love you
Rachel: What? (boyfriend comes over and shuts off the phone)
Jack (to Shawn) Shes gone man!
Shawn: Thanks Jack

(Open up to Cory and Topanga getting dressed)
Cory: I really wish that you wouldnt go to work today
Topanga: Its my first day on the Job I've Gotta be there!
Cory: Tell them your travel arrangements got messed up or something
Topanga: I cant do that Cory!
Cory: We've gotta lot of things to do! We need to find a place to live We need to get around the city!
Topanga: WE NEED MONEY!
Cory: Please honey just take the day off

Topanga adressing all besides Jack- We have about $2500 for the first month and thats only if one of you gets a job. So we are going to have to get a small apartment for now.
Jack- Wait, aren't we all going to live together?
Cory- Well, we thought you wanted your own house?
Jack- No thats why I found out from your parents where you were staying after Rachel left me at the Airport.
Eric- Dun Dun Dun Dun
Jack- Not this again
Eric- DUN DUN
Jack- You Idiot SHUT-UP!
Eric- No really! I'm done with breakfast.(shows clean plate)
Topanga- (Takes Erics plate) Alright well if we live with you, but we will pay you back as soon as we get the money.
Jack- No you wont
Topanga- We insist.
Jack- How about when my buisness starts Eric and Shawn will work with me to pay it off?
Topanga- Well atleast some of us will have a jobs (looks to cory)
Cory- (holding the news paper) Hey I'm looking at job listings right now! (actually is looking at the sports page.
Shawn- Okay theres 5 houses listed here that we can move into right away.
Eric- I want an avacado fridge!
Cory- Not this again!
Jack- Well we have a limo to take us around today
Shawn- How rich is your dad!?!?
Jack-Very rich
Topanga- is that limo (CRAZY INSANE LOUD BOOM!)
All rush to the window to look outside

(commercial)

(All looking out the window as one of the twin towers burns and people panic)
Topanga: Oh My God What just happened!?!?
Cory: I dont know I saw a plane go by out the window then a few seconds later I heard the boom
Topanga: Cory Im scared this just doesnt seem right!
Jack: Guys, I dont think that was an accident.
(Shawn goes over to the T.V. and turns it on)
(They all surround the t.v. and watch the second plane fly into the 2nd tower)
Cory: Did you just see that!?!?
Shawn: Oh my god!
Topanga: (sobbing) I dont feel safe here! I knew we should have stayed in Philadelphia
Eric: You guys! All your going to do is sit here? Didn't feeny teach you anything? I'm going over there!
Cory: Eric STOP. Its dangerous over there its not safe!
Eric: Feeny always taught us to put other people before ourselves! (walks out the door)
(Everyone left is crying at the pictures on the T.v.)

(Commercial)

(Everyone is sitting on the couch and we hear the T.V. say "The towers have collapsed!")
Shawn: (Crying) Trouble just always follows me
Cory: Shawn, you know that this is not your fault!
Shawn: I know but, I feel so helpless like I could have done something
Cory: You couldn't have done anything
Jack: Yeah man, I wish I could have done something about it too
Cory: You couldn't have saved any of those lives everyone knows that
Topanga: But you did
Cory: How?
Topanga: The lawyer firm is inside World Trade Center tower 1 (really starts bawling)
Cory: Oh my god I didnt realize that! Oh I'm so glad you stayed home today. (crying and holding topanga)
Jack: Its alright...atleast everyone is safe.
Shawn: NO THEY AREN'T ERIC WENT DOWN THERE EARLIER REMEMBER!?!?
Cory: He wouldn't have gone in would he?
(Jack looks at them as if to say yes)
(All look really scared as we hear the T.v. say "One flight from Boston to L.A. Hit the north tower")
Shawn: There won't be any survivors.
Jack: RACHEL! Damnit! She told me last night she was in Boston going to L.A.
(T.V.- Many pedestrians ran into the building as the towers smoked)
All look at eachother and run to the door.

TO BE CONTINUED

Season 8 episode 2

We open up and we get a review of the last show

(Open)

Cast is in the hotel again...
(Jack is on the phone)
Jack: Rachel its me again....please call me back! I need to know your safe
Shawn: Jack will you just stop worrying? Your Jack! Everything is going to be alright. Look I bet you your phone is going to ring any second and Rachel will be just fine.
(Cory's cell phone rings)
(Split screen we see Mr. and Mrs. Matthews.)
Alan: Cory we got your message WHERE'S ERIC?
Cory: When the second plane flew in he did what Mr. Feeny taught him to...he helped out other people
Amy (sobbing): Why didnt you stop him?
Cory: I really couldn't he..
Alan: Did you go look for him?
Cory: We tried but we couldnt get anywhere near
Amy: Were coming to New York right now!
Cory: You can but you can't get a flight in.
Alan: No were staying here with Morgan and Josh...dont worry I'm sure Eric is just helping out the rescue or something...
Cory: Yeah I dont know guys I'm going to go over there and look for him again.
Amy: Alright if you hear anything CALL US RIGHT AWAY.
Cory: I will and mom, I love you
Amy: I love you to Cor
Cory: Yeah I know we always say that but....I mean it now
Alan: Cory be careful.
Cory: Alright I will bye

(Commercial)

(Jack and Shawn are on the couch)
T.v.: We are now listing the passangers of the flight from Boston to L.A.
Jack: Rachel McGuire
Shawn: I'm so sorry man. You know maybe she could have gotten out or maybe she missed the flight or...
Jack: No Shawn shes dead! Damnit Shawn she was the girl for me its not fair!
Shawn: I know how you feel man
Jack: NO YOU DON'T!
Shawn: I dont know how you feel? Ha! The lady I thought was my mom left when i was 12! My dad wasn't around for my entire child hood. Then when I was finally getting close to him he died! Then I found out Verna wasnt my real mom and now the only person I ever loved is thousands of miles away during the scariest moments of my life. Yeah Jack I DO know how you feel.
Jack: (crying) Im sorry man I just cant belive this all its just so confused. I just need some time to myself.
Shawn: Alright man just know I'm here for you.
(shawn stands there with a tear in his eye looks up to the ceiling and says "WHY god why?")

(Commercial)

(We come back and its a run down ghetto looking place a dirty)
Cory (to random person) Have you seen this man (points to a picture of eric)
Topanga does the same
Then Both do the same to 2 more people.
Topanga: Cory I'm scared NO One has seen Eric
Cory: I know I know. Lets go to the hospital and see if hes been checked it there.

(Hospital waiting room)

Cory (to receptionist) Has an Eric Matthews neen checked in here?
Receptionist: No hes not on the list but, there are a lot of un named people. Do you have a picture of him?
Cory: Here
Receptionist: Ohhh hes in room 383 up on the third
Cory: Are you sure?
Receptionist: Yeah hes in pretty bad shape though are you ready to see him?
Cory (looks at Topanga) Yeah we are.

(Commercial)
(back to Jacks room. He is crying on the side of the bed)
Jack: God, why did you have to take her away from me. Its not fair! Why?
(Rachel's ghost appears behind him)
Rachel: Oh Jack I'm so sorry I did this to you!
Jack (cant see Rachel) You know I loved her more than anyone in the world. She even had me giving up money to go help the world she was...perfect for me.
Rachel: Jack I just wish that you knew how I felt...(ghosts disappears)
(Jacks cell phone rings)
Jack: 1 voice message...
Cell phone: You have 1 un heard message...first message sent Today at 8:57 A.M.
Rachel's Voice- Jack it's me Rachel, our plane got hi-jacked and they are going to kill all of us...(sobbing) I just want to let you know that I wish I never left you in New York...I wish we would have never broke up because..I..I..I Love you (screaming)
Cell Phone: End of message...to erase this message press 7 to save it press 9
Jack: 9 (turns off lamp and puts head on pillow)

Cory and Topanga are standing outside room 383
Cory looks at Topanga puts his arm around her...Takes a deep breath and grabs the door knob.....

TO BE CONTINUED

Episode 3- A Crazy New World Part 3

(Open up with a review of the past episodes)

(Opening video)

(Jack and Shawn are watching t.v).
Shawn: You know it seems just like a movie, it doesn't seem real
Jack: I know man, I mean our first day here and all this happens. I don't know if IM ready for the big city yet.
Shawn: Yeah Jack we are, we just need to get through this with our family.
Jack: You know if I just would have come here with Rachel and you guys in the first place it wouldn't hurt so much.
Shawn: Jack, you cant think what if...its over, you cant go back and change it.
Jack: Its harder than it seem.
(Shawn's phone rings)
Shawn: Hello
(split screen we see Angela)
Angela: (Crying) Shawn are you okay?
Shawn: Yeah babe I-I'm fine, are you okay?
Angela: Yes, I've been trying to call you all day but I couldn't get through.
Shawn: Yeah, I tried to call you too just all the phone lines were jammed up.
Angela: Oh Shawn I was so scared
Shawn: I'm fine don't worry.
Angela: How is everyone else? Is Topanga okay?
Shawn: Yeah, she's fine she stayed home from work.
Angela: And everyone else?
Shawn: Well, Jack came here yesterday he's fine, Cory is okay but, We don't know about Eric.

(Commercial)

Cory is outside rm. 383. He opens the door and walks inside with Topanga.
Eric is lying on the hospital bed all hooked up to tubes and monitors.
Topanga looks at him for a second starts bawling and leaves the room.
Cory walks over to Eric.
Cory: Why did you go down there? I warned you. You just had to listen to what Mr. Feeny taught you! Why didn't you just pretend like you listened to him like me and Shawn?!? I can't believe that this is happening you know...just 12 hours ago we had our whole lives ahead of us and just like that...its all changed. You know...before I left I told Josh that his family and friends will help him in this world and Eric you have to be there for him! Even though you weren't always there for me growing up I still looked up to you and thought you were the greatest thing in the world. Eric...don't go
(Knock Knock Knock)
Doctor: Are you his family?
Cory: Part of it...
Doctor: what is his name?
Cory: He's my brother...he's Eric Matthews.
Doctor: Okay, Eric suffered severe smoke and pollution inhalation and a lot of cuts and bruises, he got hit in the head and suffered a mild concussion. But, he should be okay within a month.
Cory: Why is he hooked up to all these machines if he's going to be okay?
Doctor: Its just precautionary. We just need to make sure he keeps breathing through the night. He should be able to go home tomarrow evening.
Cory: Thank You Doctor..
(Commercial)

(Cory outside the room again talking to Topanga)
Topanga: Cory I'm so sorry!
Cory: Sorry for what?
Topanga: If I wasn't so selfish and didn't make you move to New York none of this would have happened!
Cory: Topanga its not your fault
P.A.-Visiting Hours will end in 5 minutes.
Cory: Come on Topanga lets go...

(Scene Change)
(Split Screen Shawn/Angela)
Shawn: I don't know why he went he just went. That's the way Eric is. He always does the things that don't seem to be right but they always end up being right.
Angela: (Worried) Oh Shawn please tell Cory and Topanga I'm Praying for Eric.
Shawn: I will.
Angela: Well baby, I'm gunna go call Rachel and talk to her..
Shawn: Angela...
Angela: Yeah Shawn
Shawn: (Swallows hard and gets nervous look on his face) We think Rachel was on one of the planes that flew into the towers..
Angela: Shawn, DON'T joke about this!
Shawn: I'm not hun I'm sorry I wish I was but...
Angela: Shouldn't she have been in the peace corps by now?
Shawn: No she saw her old boy friend and left Jack at the Airport that's why he found us.
Angela: (BAWLING) Shawn NOOOO it's not true, she was my roommate! I spent soo much time with her! She was one of my bestfriends! It's not fair!
Shawn: I'm sorry babe..
Angela: (Crying) Are you sure she was on the plane Shawn?
Shawn: She's gone. Now baby get some sleep I'll call you tomorrow. All right?
Angela: Okay, I love you
Shawn: (Choked up) I love you too.
(Both hang up)

Jack (to Shawn) How did she take it?
Shawn: Pretty bad. I mean something like this changes everything
(Cory and Topanga walk in)
Cory: He's gunna be all right guys.
Shawn: Are you sure?!?
Jack: Did you see him down there?
Cory: No he's down at the hospital
Shawn: They keeping him over night?
Cory: Yeah just for observation, he had smoke inhalation and a concussion so they gotta make sure everything goes all right tonight.
Jack: I'm so happy for you man!
(Hugs Cory)
(Topanga is crying too and hugs Cory and Jack)
ShawnCrying) So this is what a family is like (Hugs the rest of them)

(Cory's phone rings)
Cory: Hello?
(Screen Split. Alan, Amy, Morgan, Josh are all around a speaker Phone in the living room)
Alan: Hey Cor you find out anything about Eric?
Cory: Yeah he's in the hospital right now for observation but, he will be out soon.
(Amy and Alan hug and cry)
Morgan: What is it like there Cory?
Cory: Its like a nightmare, I kind of feel like this Boy never really met the REAL WORLD till now.
(Topanga nudges Cory)
Topanga: President Bush is speaking
Cory (to Matthews) Turn on the TV
(President Bush is on screen)
George W: "Good evening. Today, our fellow citizens, our way of life, our very freedom came under attack in a series of deliberate and deadly terrorist acts. The victims were in airplanes, or in their offices; secretaries, businessmen and women, military and federal workers; moms and dads, friends and neighbors. Thousands of lives were suddenly ended by evil, despicable acts of terror. The pictures of airplanes flying into buildings, fires burning, huge structures collapsing, have filled us with disbelief, terrible sadness, and a quiet, unyielding anger. These acts of mass murder were intended to frighten our nation into chaos and retreat. But they have failed; our country is strong. A great people has been moved to defend a great nation. Terrorist attacks can shake the foundations of our biggest buildings, but they cannot touch the foundation of America. These acts shattered steel, but they cannot dent the steel of American resolve."
(Close up on Jack as audio plays. He is sobbing a little) "America was targeted for attack because we're the brightest beacon for freedom and opportunity in the world. And no one will keep that light from shining."
(Close up on Shawn as audio plays. He is not crying but looks very sad) "Today, our nation saw evil, the very worst of human nature. And we responded with the best of America -- with the daring of our rescue workers, with the caring for strangers and neighbors who came to give blood and help in any way they could. Immediately following the first attack, I implemented our government's emergency response plans. Our military is powerful, and it's prepared. Our emergency teams are working in New York City and Washington, D.C. to help with local rescue efforts."
(Shot of Eric Lying in the hospital bed paying 100% attention to the T.V. and crying as the audio plays) "Our first priority is to get help to those who have been injured, and to take every precaution to protect our citizens at home and around the world from further attacks. The functions of our government continue without interruption. Federal agencies in Washington which had to be evacuated today are reopening for essential personnel tonight, and will be open for business tomorrow. Our financial institutions remain strong, and the American economy will be open for business, as well."
(Shot of all the Matthews in Philadelphia, Amy has her arms around Alans waist and has her head on his chest while crying. Morgan is crying and has her arm around Josh as this audio plays) "The search is underway for those who are behind these evil acts. I've directed the full resources of our intelligence and law enforcement communities to find those responsible and to bring them to justice. We will make no distinction between the terrorists who committed these acts and those who harbor them. I appreciate so very much the members of Congress who have joined me in strongly condemning these attacks. And on behalf of the American people, I thank the many world leaders who have called to offer their condolences and assistance.
(Shot of Cory and Topanga standing next to eachother as audio plays) "America and our friends and allies join with all those who want peace and security in the world, and we stand together to win the war against terrorism."
(Topanga starts to cry. Cory puts his left arm around her and grabs her left hand with his right) "Tonight, I ask for your prayers for all those who grieve, for the children whose worlds have been shattered, for all whose sense of safety and security has been threatened."
(Cory kisses Topangas right hand as audio plays) And I pray they will be comforted by a power greater than any of us, spoken through the ages in Psalm 23: "Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I fear no evil, for You are with me. "
( Close up of Cory's sad face as audio plays) "This is a day when all Americans from every walk of life unite in our resolve for justice and peace. America has stood down enemies before, and we will do so this time.."
(A single tear rolls down Cory's Cheek as audio plays)" None of us will ever forget this day Yet, we go forward to defend freedom and all that is good and just in our world."
(President Bush on screen) : "Thank you. Good night, and God bless America."
End of show. Black screen with white type that says " In Memory of all those lost and affected in 9/11 " ~ Cast of BMW



Episode 8-4 "Here We Go" Started at 12:25 A.M EST finished 1:48 A.M. EST

(Open up and Cory and Topanga are in bed and we can tell by the lighting that its the morning. Topanga is lying with her head on Cory's chest. Cory opens his eyes and looks out the window.)
Cory: Its like a whole new world.
Topanga (waking up)- What did you say Hun?
Cory: I was just looking outside and seeing how different the world is now.
Topanga: It's the same world, we are just seeing it in a different way.
Cory: Maybe your right Topanga.
Topanga: You know we need to start getting back up on our feet.
Cory: I know we do but...it just seems difficult.
Topanga: Yeah but, Eric has been home for more than a week now and he's doing just fine. Shawn is okay, We are okay.
Cory: But Jack isn't.
Topanga: Well we have to get his mind off the whole thing. Plus, the hotel says that they have reservations for the room in two days so we need to get out of here!
Cory: Here we go
(Opening theme song and video)
Jack is sitting on the side of his bed with a tear in his eye with the cell phone up to his ear
Cell phone: First saved message sent Tuesday, September 11th at 8:57 A.M.

Rachel's Voice- Jack it's me Rachel, our plane got hijacked and they are going to kill all of us...(sobbing) I just want to let you know that I wish I never left you in New York...I wish we would have never broke up because..I..I..I Love you (screaming)

Cell Phone: End of message...to erase this message press 7 to save it press 9

Jack: I love you Rachel.

Scene Change- Now in the kitchen where Shawn is making breakfast

Shawn: Mornin Bro!
Jack: How ya doin?
Shawn: Good, I finally got a great night of sleep.
Jack: I heard.
Shawn: Did I already tell you?
Jack: No you snore louder than your pig used to!
Shawn: Oh man, I'm sorry you shoulda woke me up.
Jack: No its all right I wouldn't have been able to sleep anyway.
Shawn: Man you aren't taking this very well are you.
Jack: No man! All I think about is Rachel and how I let her go with her boyfriend. I killed her!
Shawn: Come on man your joking! There is no way that you knew this was going to happen!
Jack: I just feel so..
Shawn: Everything happens for a reason. You know that. You know when God needs another angel with him he has to take an angel from earth

(Commercial)

We come back and Cory and Topanga are still in bed.

Cory: While you take a shower I will look for some houses in the paper.

Topanga: Maybe you could have Jack help you to get Rachel off his mind.

Cory: All right babe.

(Eric jumps on the bed)

Eric: Hey bro, hey sis!

Topanga: Hey Eric how you doin?

Eric: I feel a little smokey

Topanga: What?

Eric: Yeah you know...I had smoke inhilation so I feel a lil smokey!

Topanga: All right, this is the part where I go take a shower.

(Topanga and Cory kiss. Topanga walks out of the room)

Cory: You know Eric you had us all worried when you went down to the towers and I don't think people like it when you joke about it.

Eric: Yeah well it just helps me to laugh about it. I mean when Jack gets worried his hair falls out of place. When Shawn gets worried he goes out and decides your not his friend. When Topanga gets worried she just makes your life miserable (laughing)

Topanga screams from the bathroom)

Topanga: ITS MY JOB!

Eric: And when you get worried well, you just panic and think the worst. But, I like to joke about it.

Cory: So this whole thing didn't change you at all?

Eric: Well I realized that when people are in trouble other people come to the rescue.

Cory: Yeah

Eric: I want to do it all the time.

Cory: What?

Eric: I'm gunna be a fireman!

(Cory looks at Eric like he's crazy and the scene changes into the dining room area where everyone is eating and Cory is looking at the paper)

Cory: Hey look we could live right under MTV!

Eric: I could meet the Backstreet Boys!

Shawn: Why would you want to meet them?

Eric: I think their HOTT!

Shawn: Hey Cor, maybe we could finally meet Britney Spears.

Eric: Wait Britney Spears?! (said very quickly) You mean the school girl turned slave girl hot momma with the boom boom and the bang bang?

Shawn: Yeah that would be the one

Eric: I want it THAT way

Jack (to Cory) Well Eric will obviously get us kicked out of there within 2 hours so is there any thing else?

Cory: Yeah theirs still five that we can move into right away that are pretty good priced and in the area.

Jack: Well, I guess I can call that limo we wanted?

Cory (To Jack): You ready?

Jack: Yeah

(Commercial)

(We come back and we see a limo going down the street with Eric hanging his head out the window with his tongue hanging out. They stop at a Huge house

Jack- This looks nice!

Topanga- Its already decorated so it wont feel like my house

Cory- At least we won't have any road stripe yellow problems.

Topanga- Well that's true

Jack- well our house has to make everyone comfortable.

Eric: This house is larger than life!

Jack: That's Backstreetboy Reference number 2!

Eric: Plus there isn't an avocado fridge! Heck there's no fridge.

Jack: We'll get you an avocado fridge!

Eric: As long as you love me!

Jack (to shawn): That's three right?

Shawn: Yeah

Topanga: Well lets go to the next one.

Eric: Shotgun!

Jack: Who calls shotgun in a limo?

Cory: My brother. The hero.

(Smiles and walks out)

(Now we have a video of 3 other houses and each Cory, Shawn and Eric shake their heads at the different houses.)

(They stop at the last house which looks old and run down.)

Cory- Look at this im not going to like it!

Topanga- It doesn't look like it is safe to live in.

Shawn- Ive lived in worse

Eric- I bet it doesn't even have a refrigerator!

Jack- lets just go look inside. Its our last option.

(They get inside and its all falling apart a little.)

(Topanga and Jack are talking)

Jack: Well what do ya think?

Topanga: It looks a little run down but we could really fix this place up.

Jack: Yeah and we all could have our own rooms. And this is close to the city.

Cory: (runs into the room) Topanga! A Nook!!!

(Topanga smiles and says to Jack)

Topanga: Someone else likes it!

(Eric runs in out of breath)

Cory: Eric are you okay? Do we need to take you to the hospital?

Eric: Over there (points off stage) is an avocado fridge!

Cory: I think we have a winner. What you think Shawney?

Shawn: Hey Jack can't drive it away. I'm okay with it.

Eric: Hey Cory! Remember when we used to pretend bullfight at grandmas house by that front door? (Eric demonstrates and hits his head on the door)

Jack: That explains so much

Topanga: Jack, I'm so proud of you. You haven't even talked about Rachel once today.

Jack: Excuse me I've gotta go to the bathroom

(Everyone looks at him oddly as he walks off)

Jack is in the bathroom and dials on his phone
Cell phone: You have 1 saved message...first saved message sent Tuesday, September 11th at 8:57 A.M.

Rachel's Voice- Jack it's me Rachel, our plane got hijacked and they are going to kill all of us...(sobbing) I just want to let you know that I wish I never left you in New York...I wish we would have never broke up because..I..I..I Love you (screaming)

Cell Phone: End of message...to erase this message press 7 to save it press 9

Jack says: NINE Cries and .....we get end credits

Episode 5.
(Opening starts)
(Opening credits as topanga is on the phone)
We open up and Topanga is on the phone
Topanga: Are you sure? Okay...I'll be there in about 45 minutes.
Topanga: (To Cory) Hey cor I've gotta go to work. They are setting up at another store-front in times square. Ill be home around 5.
Cory: NO your not. its my first day at my new school! I want my wife to walk me to school!
Topanga: Dont worry, your other wife will take you to school.
Cory: Wha? Who?
Topanga: SHAWN!! Get in here and talk to cory!
Cory: I dont want shawn to take me I want to go with you!
Topanga: I've gotta go to work so we can get some more money!
Cory: But why do you have to start the same day I start school?
Topanga: Cory, you know you only need 5 more credits for your masters!
Cory: I do?
Topanga: AHHH does your brain ever do anything?
(Shawn walks in)
Cory: hey shawn i only need 5 more credits and im going to be a master!
Shawn: Really. I only need 4. After we graduate what are we going to do? Be fishermen?
Cory: That would make me us masterbaiters
(Cory and shawn look at eachother and start cracking up)
Topanga: I'll just pretend like i never heard that.
(Eric walks in)
Eric: Hey sis, whats all the noise about?
Topanga: Your brothers afraid to go to school
Eric: Oh just pack him an extra fruit-roll up in his lunch box and he will be just fine.
Topanga (to all) Alright i'm leaving. If you need to call me i left the number on the table. (kisses cory) Call me after school honey.
(Scene Change into the student union at NYCU)
Cory: Ive got Modern English, Buisness, British English, history, and historical modern history.
Shawn: WE"VE GOT 3 OF THE SAME CLASSES!!!!!
(They jump and hug and cheer)
Girl NYCU student: Ewww Your boys!
Cory: Well which do we have together?
Shawn: Modern English, British english, and Historical modern history.
Cory: What is you other class?
Shawn: Some other english?
Cory: What good is all the english when your going to work in buisness?
Shawn: Im not. I want to be an english teacher.
Cory: What?
Shawn: Yeah like mr. Feeny
Cory: theres no good money in teaching!
Shawn: Well ill be better off than my dad was.
Cory: Oh it's 11:55 We need to be in class at Noon.
(they run out and we see the NYCU Girl jumping up and down with another girl saying "weve got 2 classes together")
(Cory Comes back into the picture..Mocking says) Eww your girls!
(Commercial)
(Come back and the scene is in a gymnasium. There are about 20 really muscular guys in good shape standing there along with eric.)
Eric (to some very big guy): So you wanna be a fireman too?
Guy: Fireman?
Eric: yeah man this is FD NY tryouts duh! Where have you been?
Guy: This is NY PD tryouts you dingus!
Eric: you mean like police?
Guy: NEW YORK POLICE DEPARTMENT!
Eric: wow that teaches me not to read the new paper in the mirrior.
Guy: (Laughing) You know your pretty funny kid.
Eric: (acting very serious) I really did read the paper in the mirror
Guy: (laughing again) My name is Rocco
Eric: Hi my Name is Eric Matthews
Rocco: are you serious you thought this was FD NY tryouts?
Eric: Yeah well i'd better get going.
(Door Slams. and a VERY STRONG man walks in): I am officer Dingle.
Eric: (to rocco) Haha dingle like dingle berry
Officer Dingle: What was that?
Eric: Just commenting on how much that gun could hurt me.
Officer Dingle: Okay. I am here to help select two new members of the NY PD. I am not going to take any crap from any of you. This is going to be like bootcamp and the last two survivors will be the newest addition to the force. Good luck.
Eric (to rocco) Man Ive gotta get outta here
Officer Dingle: NO ONE LEAVES
Eric: Oh Boy!
(scene change) (Jack in the house on the phone)
Jack: Hey dad
Dad (played by a rich yuppie looking guy): Jack
Jack: Dad We got the house
Dad: alright! Ill send over some house-warming gifts
Jack: No dad its okay
Dad: alright well what do you want?
Jack: You gave me all this money...for what?
Dad: because i love you
Jack: Okay well what if i blow the money
Dad: Did you blow the money already?
Jack: no its just that i'm afraid that i might not do too good.
Dad: sure you will
Jack: Well I decided what i'm gunna do with the money.
Dad: and...
Jack: im opening up a store
Dad: what kind?
Jack: Im not sure but i've got it narrowed down to 3. A C.D Store, A Sporting Goods store, and an upscale clothing store.
Dad: Well your in new york.
Jack: so
Dad: it should be pretty obvious to any buisness man...
Jack (unsure) oh haha yeah of course
Dad: The Yankees, The Mets, The Giants, The Jets, THe Kincks the Rangers. All the money is in sports.
Jack: Okay dad..thanks for the help
Dad: You know im always here for you
Jack: Thanks.
(Commercial)
(Come back in a classroom)
(Cory and shawn are in their usual seats. Cory Second row center, shawn right behind)
(Camera is still on cory) Teacher: hello class My name is Mr. Deeney.
(teacher is actually mr. feeny with a different hairstyle glasses and hair color)
Deeny: I will be you teacher for this semseter. and this will be a thrill for all of us im sure.
Cory (To Shawn): Man this guy is a drag!
Deeny: Mr. Matthews please direct your attention to the front of the class
Deeny: What is english? It is not simply a language. Its not simply writing. Its an art. From the great sonets by shakespere to the christmas tales of charles dickens english is more than just words.
Cory: (To shawn) You know...mr. Feeny was never this boring
Deeny: MR MATTHEWS SEE ME AFTER CLASS!!
(Cory and shawn sit there in shock)
(Scene change to The Gym)
Dingle: The first test will be the 20 minute run. And...Go!!!
(everyone starts running and eric tries to leave through the door but dingle stops him. Eric proceeds to hide in the corner out of dingles view until he shouts one minute left. THen eric starts to run with the rest of the group.)
Dingle: I see that we lost six men here. Johnson, Sura, Stevens, Perez, Stienbach, and and Adams get outta here!
Eric (to rocco) alright rocco we both made it outta the first test!!
Rocco: Man your not even sweaty!
Eric: yeah ive got small sweat glands (nods matter of factly)
Dingle: Ah we are down to 14 candidates. Matthews! You made it through that?
Eric: Yeah buddy im gunna be one "Good looking Cop"
Dingle: (shakes head) Next test is the push up test. You will have 3 minutes to do as many as you can. The top 7 will make it to the pain tolerance course!
First Group. Matthews, king, Williams, Ponchack, Miller, Kopone, Steiner.
Eric: (to rocco) okay buddy your gunna be in the next group.
Rocco: Okay buddy! But my name is rocco king.
Eric: ohhh i thought you were just like bono, or prince with one name.
Dingle: Get ready Get set...go!
(7 of them start doing pushups)
Dingle: Results: King:163 Ponchack: 156 Kopone: 131 Steiner: 129 Miller: 121 Williams: 116. Matthews: 42
Eric: ALRIGHT im in!
DIngle: No you fool theres still 7 more people to go. So...on your mark get set...go!
(eric whispers something to rocco)
(We see eric and rocco make all the people laugh and fall over knocking them out of the competition)
Eric: WOOO HOOO I MADE IT!!
(Scene Change) (At the Herff Jones office)
Topanga: Heres your coffee mr. Herff.
Herff (spins around in his chair and we see its Bob Saget from the hit show Full House): Thanks alot Mrs. Matthews. You've done a swell job today. Dont let the passion slip!
Topanga: Well all ive done is answer phones and get you coffee its not like i won a case or anything.
herff: well I always said... to be sucsessful you gotta start at the base of the foundation.
Topanga: Oh okay
Herff: I just sounded like a fortune cookie didnt I?
Topanga: Just a little
Herff: Yeah im not the cool one. Not the one that gets all the murder cases. NOOOO i get the parking tickets and the shoplifters.
Topanga: well those are all very important in their own right.
Herff: thats why i like you. Your not one of those young kids looking for all the action. You understand the value of simplicity. Most interns go into mr. Jones office and they never leave his side because hes the cool hip lawyer.
Topanga: I havent even seen mr. Jones yet. Is he here?
Herff: Yeah hes over in his office to the right.
(Jones's door open and Seann Williams Scott walks out)
Jones: Attention all employees of this great company!! In honor of my 100th straight court victory i am giving you all Tickets to the luxury box at yankee stadium. Oh and a 5% pay increase!
Topanga (to herff): Thats no way to run a buisness did he ask you about that first?!?!
Herff: no but i mean who cares i get to go to the yankees game!
Topanga shrugs as the scene closes
(Scene is the gym again)
Dingle: you last 7 will go through an obsticle pain tolerance test. It will hurt. you will sweat, you will bleed, you will cry, The object is to get furthest in the course but...remember have fun (said sarcastically)
They show the obsticle course and the first obsticle is to have a tennis ball cannon shot at you. The first person looks at the speed and says
Person: Im out!
2nd person runs and takes a ball off his chest. He starts crying and leaves. same with the 3rd 4th and 5th.
Up 6th is rocco. He takes 15 shots and finally quits.
Rocco: alright matthews it stings a little but dont worry i think you can handle it.
Eric: Ive gotta plan.
Dingle: alright you need to take 6 or more and your an NYPD officer. Ready (eric puts his head directly ahead of the cannon) Set...GO
(Eric takes 6 shots off the top of his head)
Rocco: ALRIGHT BUDDY YOU DID IT!!!!
Eric: what?
Rocco: YOUR IN! We're in!
Dingle: aww i've gotta work with you?!?! (Leaves)
Eric: seriously what just happened here?
Rocco: Your a cop!!
Eric: You mean bad guys are gunna try to kill me?
Rocco: yeah, you get to protect the greatest city in the world!
Eric: man i might get killed!
Rocco: but imagine how many lives you will save!
Eric: Do I get a dog?
Rocco: maybe
Eric: ALRIGHT MAN IM IN!!!
(close credits play over a still image of eric jumping into roccos arms)

Episode 6
(Open Video and music)
Opening credits play as we see the outside of the house)
(Shawn and Jack and Cory are sitting at the table)
Jack: Isn't this great? Every morning I get to wake up and have breakfast with my brother and his best friend!
Shawn: Okay what do you want?
Jack: What can't I just point out that I like how we live now?
Cory: No Hunter you cant we see right through you!
Jack: This is unbelievable!
(Topanga walks in)
Jack: Topanga, I was just saying to Shawn and Cory how much I like getting to spend time with them and they think I want something from them!
Topanga: well what do you want?
Jack: What is this!?
Topanga: Well normally when you need something you act a little nicer than normal.
jack: name ONE time.
Topanga: Well, Eric told us about his "superpowers" and the time when you wanted to get along with Shawn you were nice to him. And...
Jack: all right alright! I need help getting the store ready for when it opens.
Cory: Well you coulda just asked
Jack: so your in?
(Cory and Shawn look at eachother)
Both: HAHAHA NO
Jack (getting mad): you know I ask one simple thing from you two and you guys just sit here doing nothing as usual!
Shawn: But its what we do best.
Topanga: Cory I want to talk to you!
Cory: Cant I finish my fruit loops?
Topanga: NO
Cory: But they'll get all soggy
Topanga (grabs Cory by the shirt and takes him aside) I want you to help jack.
Cory: Why?
Topanga: He's paying for your food, your house, your subway fare, and I know for a fact that you didn't buy me those flowers yesterday at the grocery store!
Cory: You heard him, he doesn't want us to pay him!
Topanga: But, he deserves our respect and help!
Cory: IM getting an education isn't that enough?
Topanga: NOOO! How does that help jack?
Cory: It doesn't! But when I graduate...
Topanga: Shush! Your going to class today and then your going to help jack. No questions asked.
Cory: But...
Topanga: one more word and No kissey for you tonight!
(They walk back to where jack and Shawn are sitting)
Topanga: Jack, Cory has something to say to you.
Cory: I'm sorry I will help you out today after class.
Shawn: Cory we had plans!
Cory (To jack): And shawns gunna help too!
Shawn: Cory!
Cory: (points at Shawn) One more word outta you and no kissey tonite!
Shawn: I dot want kissey!
Cory: It doesn't matter if you want kissey your helping out your brother whether you like it or not!
Shawn: Okay I'm with ya buddy!
(Commercial)
(Come back and Rocco and Eric are in city hall)
Eric: So this is where we get our badges?
Rocco: No we are just getting background checks and filling out papers to be in the NYPD
Eric: Aww man this is horrible!
Rocco: What?
Eric: I never painted any backgrounds for the plays in highschool!!
Rocco: Man, I really want to meet your family
Eric: why?
Rocco: Cause I've gotta lot of questions
Eric: about what?
Rocco: ohh just about how you got so stupid
Eric: You know your the 5th person to ask me that this week!
Rocco: Not surprising at all!
Eric: So where do we have to go now?
Rocco: we gotta find where Adam Stein's office is.
Eric: No problem (Eric picks up an intercom phone) Adam Stein please report to Rocco and Eric! Adam Stein
Rocco (grabs the phone and hangs it up): (to Eric) Man are you insane!?
Eric: No I just really wanna get my badge!
Rocco: alright come with me well go find this guys office
(black) (Scene change to the herff jones office)
Herff: Topanga! Today's the big day!!
Topanga: Aww Mr. Herff did your new pens with your name on them come in the mail finally?!
Herff: No those darn things still haven't come yet
Topanga: oh I'm sure they just are lost in the mail or something
herff: Oh well that wasn't what i was talking about anyway.
Topanga: What's so special about today?
Herff: you get to witness the herff man in action for the first time!
Topanga: Oh really (pretending to be excited) what kind of case is it?
Herff: Get this a guy accidentally ran over some ladies cat!
Topanga: why are you excited?
Herff: Cause its an open shut case?
Topanga: But your going to lose?
Herff: NO WAY! You see the guy was going 55 in a 25 zone but, that doesn't matter because the dog didn't have a leash on and New York has a STRICT dog leash policy!
Topanga: Well isn't that a little dishonest?
Herff: that's the first thing you've gotta do in this business kid...you gotta look and see if there is any thing that the other person did wrong before you start getting into the case.
Topanga: well when are we leaving for the court house?
Herff: in about 15 minutes. The trial starts at 4 so were looking at getting in and outta there in about 45 minutes.
Topanga: well I'll just go call home and say I'll be a little late.
(Go to black) Fade up outside of a store)
(Cory and Shawn are standing there)
Cory: You know he said be here by 3 and its 3:15
Shawn: Well Cor...us hunters are different from normal people.
Cory: What?
Shawn: Hunters are late...always late...Chet was late for his wedding and all 4 of his divorces.
Cory: So what your saying is no matter what a hunter is always late?
Shawn: Yeah
Cory: That explains all the tardies you had in high school
(Shawn nods to Cory as jack walks up)
Jack: sorry im late fella's I was on the subway and some guy was playing a banjo and well you know IM a sucker for the banjo.
Shawn (whispers to Cory): After the Hunter being late, the hunter lie begins.
Cory: Ahhh so that's why your grandma died 26 times in high school
Shawn: Yeah she didn't like it when feeny called her house asking if she was dead.
Jack: alright you two lets get to work.
(We see Cory and Shawn doing all sorts of things. Painting the sign on the front of the store, Cleaning the toilets, Putting up shelves which of course fall as soon as they think they are finished. Then they are building a checkout counter.)
(Scene Change Rocco and Eric are in an office)
Secretary: Alright...I need your thumb print here..and I need you to fill out these...and then you will have a drug test and you'll be on your way.
Eric: Then do we get our badges?
Secretary: No not yet.
Eric: (very mad) Quit playing games with me lady I want a badge before I leave or IM going to be angry!
Rocco (pushes Eric outta the way) You'll have to excuse him the people at mcdonalds wouldn't let him get a happy meal so hes a little mad.
Secretary: its quite alright. I just need your thumbprint (Rocco puts his finger on the stamp pad and then on a piece of paper) very good. Now Mr. Matthews. (Eric slowly puts his thumb on the stamp pad and then on to the paper. He looks at his finger)
Eric: Oh my god!! Your trying to kill me!! im going to get ink poisoning!! (Falls over and starts shaking)
Rocco: Get a hold of yourself man!!!
Eric: But my thumb!!
Rocco: Do you want your badge or no?
Eric: Badge Please!
Secretary: Alright now go fill out these forms.
(they take a thick stack of papers) (They go sit down and start filling it out. Eric tries to look off roccos paper but Rocco blocks his view)
Eric: WHAT ARE YOU PUTTING DOWN FOR # 8??
Rocco: IM not telling you!
Eric: Come on!
Rocco: it doesn't matter i social security numbers are different!!
Eric: ohhh...How about #14?
Rocco: our moms maiden names are different too!!
(We see black and then Eric and Rocco turn in their forms)
Eric: alright so we are done!
Secretary: No now you need to do the drug test.
Eric: Okay...I think Advil works just a little better than tylonel but the best is Aleve!
Secretary: umm....thats fine. You need to fill this up (hands him a cup)
Eric: Fill it with what?
Secretary: Urine...
Eric (looks around): Normally ive got a bigger target.
Secretary: just aim for the cup.
Eric: Right in here?!?!
Secretary: No in the bathroom sir.
Eric: Ohhh I see (winks at the secretary as he walks in the bathroom)
Secretary (to Rocco): How did he get so stupid?
Rocco: beats me...
We hear Eric scream " I MISSED!!!"
(Commercial)
Cory Shawn and Eric are standing in the store with no merchandise but they are at the check out counter and shawns cell phone rings)
Shawn: Hello (Screen splits)
Angela: Hey Shawn!
Shawn: hey babe how you doing?
Angela: Fine...how bout you
Shawn: Great! I love it here. Everything's going great! IM about to finish school and I'm going to teach English
Angela: that's great to hear
Shawn: Well, it would be so much better if you were here
Angela: That's what I wanted to talk to you about.
Shawn: Okay
Angela: You see...since the terrorist attacks, my dad has been going from army base to base. And soon he's going to have to go to Afghanistan. So in a few months IM coming home baby (starts to cry)
Shawn: Are you serious? Oh WOW that's GREAT! I cant wait.
Angela: I know I know, I'm just scared for my dad.
Shawn: well he's the best general I know so he should be just fine.
Angela: Yeah I hope so.
Shawn: Well I've gotta go help Cory and jack with something so ill let you go.
Angela: Okay
Shawn: Love you
Angela: See you soon!
(Screen comes back to Cory and Shawn And jack)
Shawn: (smiling) She's coming home!
Cory: That's great!
Shawn: No its not
Cory: Why not?
Shawn: I'm having the best time of my life here and its been without her.
Jack: So your not allowed to have fun without your girl?
Shawn: it just isn't right.
Cory: Well worry about it some other time.
Jack: Hey call everyone and tell them to come down here for the unveiling of the store sign.
(Scene Change: Outside the courthouse)
Topanga: That was amazing! All you had to do was point out the dog wasn't on the leash and your client didn't have to pay for the damages!
Herff: yeah that's how it works!
(Topangas phone rings)
Topanga: okay ill be down there a.s.a.p.
Herff: alright you need a ride?
Topanga: No I'll just grab the subway
herff: good night.
(Scene change to city hall where rocco and Eric are outside)
Rocco: Man you made a fool outta yourself in there!
Eric: Hey we still get our badges tomorrow!
(Eric's phone rings)
Eric: alright I'm right down the street I'll be there soon
Eric(to rocco: Hey I've gotta go to my friends store.
Rocco: alright ill just go...home
Eric: you wanna come with me?
Rocco: really?!
eric: yeah sure
Rocco: Alright!
(Scene change outside the store)
Jack (addressing everyone including rocco): Thanks to the help of Cory AND shawn the store is ready to receive merchandise and will be open in about a week.
(everyone claps)
Jack: And now the moment you've been waiting for. (Pulls a string which drops the sheet from the sign)
Topanga: McGuire sports?
Jack: Yeah I figure its only right.
(Screen freezes)
Jack is in the store with one light on as the closing credits play...he's on his cell phone and we hear:
Cell phone: You have 1 saved message...first saved message sent Tuesday, September 11th at 8:57 A.M.

Rachel's Voice- Jack it's me Rachel, our plane got hijacked and they are going to kill all of us...(sobbing) I just want to let you know that I wish I never left you in New York...I wish we would have never broke up because..I..I..I Love you (screaming)

Cell Phone: End of message...to erase this message press 7 to save it press 9

Jack says: NINE..It will always be nine rachel.
(SHOW IS OVER)

Sheebs

Dan ~ I found the fanfic thread for you! It was never posted in, so you are the first story! I will definately read it when I have time!! Thanks for posting it!

lainypopvp

I have a few stories written, but I have yet to upload them. Will anyone read if I post??

msstock87

I have been known to read some FanFic.

lainypopvp

Gold - Fanfic

I wrote this a few days ago. Working on a third chapter. I could use a suggestion! Any missing scenes anyone wants to read?

msstock87

I will give it a read.

ihavealife2uknow

Anyone have any favorite Girl Meets World (or BMW) fics? I'm always looking for something interesting to read.

Awesome Nerds

Kept being on the verge of making a thread for fic, but then there is one after all, and boy it's been around/abandoned a while/few times

Obviously I have my Lucaya Project, which is linked in my signature.

And right now I am working on a few other things...

Anyone else have anything to share that they have written or read?