[ALuv]

Originally Posted by hearty26 (View Post) Oh yes, i had this story copied but never read ... I will do that now Hi Lauren, nice to see you

Hi Conny! How are you? Must be nice to have something new to read

[hearty26]

It's really nice ... and it's nicer that I have the time to read because of my days off ... I've got a cold but I am feeling better from day to day -.

[RoxyBlueGirl7]

Eternity was updated again today.

[hearty26]

thanks roxy

[hellishrose]

Something is bothering me about Eternity and I can't quite place what it is. The author has a well developed writing style but I think the plot is bothering me. I can't figure it out and you would think I would be less discerning especially since the lack of updates lately!

[Eternal Flame]

Thnx Laura

[RoxyBlueGirl7]

Originally Posted by hellishrose (View Post) Something is bothering me about Eternity and I can't quite place what it is. The author has a well developed writing style but I think the plot is bothering me. I can't figure it out and you would think I would be less discerning especially since the lack of updates lately!

To me the plot just seems very predictable. It's something we've seen in movies and shows many times. There are things I dislike about the characterizations of Rory and Logan too. Rory seems so... weak. One thing I dislike is that she's written to have nothing meaningful in her life except for moments with Logan. I also wonder about her relationship with her parents and grandparents. Overall though, I think it's a really cute story. It could definitely be stronger, but I still find it enjoyable.

[ALuv]

Originally Posted by RoxyBlueGirl7 (View Post) To me the plot just seems very predictable. It's something we've seen in movies and shows many times. There are things I dislike about the characterizations of Rory and Logan too. Rory seems so... weak. One thing I dislike is that she's written to have nothing meaningful in her life except for moments with Logan. I also wonder about her relationship with her parents and grandparents. Overall though, I think it's a really cute story. It could definitely be stronger, but I still find it enjoyable.

I agree. I'm really enjoying the story right now, but I think I wouldn't enjoy it as much if it had come out in a time when updates were plentiful. I still probably would have read and enjoyed it, just not as much. What you've said about the characterizations is spot on though.

[AlwaysHoldingOn]

I read a few things and I just it didn't get my attention actually

Hi Lauren and Roxy!!!

dear animal luver, when are you going to update???

Seriously I NEED updates!!!

[RoxyBlueGirl7]

Originally Posted by ALuv (View Post) I'm really enjoying the story right now, but I think I wouldn't enjoy it as much if it had come out in a time when updates were plentiful. I still probably would have read and enjoyed it, just not as much.

I agree. A lot of my favorites have not been updated in awhile, so I'm enjoying this story more because it's being updated. It's a cute story, but it's not something I would enjoy as much if more stories were being updated.

[fox24]

I am not to crazy about Eternity I don't know why, its just something about it that doesn't hold my attention. However, its a good fic to read in a shortage of updates.

[ALuv]

OK, my indecision is killing me...I'm getting nothing accomplished, so I've decided to let you guys do the deciding What story should I work on next...WhiV or TaB?

[hearty26]

please ... pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase write complete titles ... I have missed so much

[ALuv]

Originally Posted by hearty26 (View Post) please ... pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase write complete titles ... I have missed so much

Sorry Conny, here you go...

WHiV= What Happens in Vegas -- the one where they (shocker!!) meet up in Vegas 6 months after the series finale and wind up hitched.

TaB= Take a Breath-- the sequel to Skip a Beat.

[hearty26]

I vote for Take a breath (because I didn't read the other yet ... I think I have to do this ... sorrym but I didn't have the time ...)