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We can make this together
I won't forget you or neglect you You're a postcard never posted And I'm distracted so easy [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me I wonder what you think about and everyday i wanna be a risk you take Like the unexpected way you drew me in If only we had just a minute longer [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me A girl like me is lost on you I examined some lyrics at DG.com to get an idea of structure, but found that it varies considerably from song to song. So you can pretty much repeat the bridge and chorus wherever, and choruses and verses can be up to eight lines long. Just go with what sounds right, I say.  Or, (and I just had a brain wave) maybe we could model the next song on one from IE - the person who starts the song copy/pastes one from DG.com, and we develop our own song based on that structure. It might make structuring easier, and make lurkers feel more confident to join in. What do you think?  __________________
I believe the impossible
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We can make this together
I won't forget you or neglect you You're a postcard never posted And I'm distracted so easy [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me I wonder what you think about and everyday i wanna be a risk you take Like the unexpected way you drew me in If only we had just a minute longer [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me A girl like me is lost on you Catch me if I should fall That sounds like a good plan, Kat! Picking a specific song  __________________
We are going to spice you up so much you’re going to forget you’re white! ~ Hilda |
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 We can make this together I won't forget you or neglect you You're a postcard never posted And I'm distracted so easy [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me I wonder what you think about and everyday i wanna be a risk you take Like the unexpected way you drew me in If only we had just a minute longer [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me A girl like me is lost on you Catch me if I should fall Will you fall for me __________________
I believe the impossible
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We can make this together
I won't forget you or neglect you You're a postcard never posted And I'm distracted so easy [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me I wonder what you think about and everyday i wanna be a risk you take Like the unexpected way you drew me in If only we had just a minute longer [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me A girl like me is lost on you Catch me if I should fall Will you fall for me I'll always be around __________________
We are going to spice you up so much you’re going to forget you’re white! ~ Hilda |
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We can make this together
I won't forget you or neglect you You're a postcard never posted And I'm distracted so easy [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me I wonder what you think about and everyday i wanna be a risk you take Like the unexpected way you drew me in If only we had just a minute longer [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me A girl like me is lost on you Catch me if I should fall Will you fall for me I'll always be around We can make this together I won't forget you or neglect you You're a postcard never posted And I'm distracted so easy [bridge] So much is happening to me You just never know what life can bring [chorus] A vision I can only fantasise Don't let me see mistakes and lies What you get is what you see Here I am, this is me I thought I'd finish it by repeating the whole first section. And I thought we'd model our next song creation on... ------------------------------- Butterfly i won't hurt you i'll protect you i won't let the rain fall down i'll always be around and baby i will understand if sometimes you just want to spread your wings and fly and let your colours shine and everyday i wanna be a risk you take make a promise that will never break for life [CHORUS] you're my butterfly don't fly away open my hands your free praying you'll come back to me you're my butterfly don't fly away you're my reality always be my gravity you're my butterfly come on and touch the sky you're my butterfly i won't forget you or neglect you won't let no-one take your place in your eyes i see my face and baby do you know that everybody watches every time that you take flight they're blinded by your light every day the feeling's gonna be the same i can promise that will never change for life CHORUS ------------ No need to worry about making the lines ryhme the same way (although if you can where the model does that would be great). But the main aim is to mimic the structure - line length, and number of lines to a stanza. Now over to you guys (and if there are any lurkers out there, please do feel free to join Rach and I in building this song!  ).__________________
I believe the impossible
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In the oceans
No emotions __________________
I believe the impossible
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In the oceans
No emotions I wonder how a dream looks Out of breath out of focus __________________
I believe the impossible
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In the oceans
No emotions I wonder how a dream looks Out of breath out of focus Life is such a wonderful thing I hear the whispers madame butterfly __________________
I believe the impossible
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In the oceans
No emotions I wonder how a dream looks Out of breath out of focus Life is such a wonderful thing I hear the whispers madame butterfly Here in the dark I can be strong __________________
We are going to spice you up so much you’re going to forget you’re white! ~ Hilda |
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In the oceans
No emotions I wonder how a dream looks Out of breath out of focus Life is such a wonderful thing I hear the whispers madame butterfly Here in the dark I can be strong Words from the heart or a melody __________________
I believe the impossible
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In the oceans
No emotions I wonder how a dream looks Out of breath out of focus Life is such a wonderful thing I hear the whispers madame butterfly Here in the dark I can be strong Words from the heart or a melody Questioning every line that someone said __________________
We are going to spice you up so much you’re going to forget you’re white! ~ Hilda |
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In the oceans
No emotions I wonder how a dream looks Out of breath out of focus Life is such a wonderful thing I hear the whispers madame butterfly Here in the dark I can be strong Words from the heart or a melody Questioning every line that someone said You brought me light __________________
I believe the impossible
is possible to overcome i believe in miracles born from love in everyone icon by *Evie |
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