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| Elite Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | aww chapter two was so sweet, i really liked it. i loved the interaction between them and then when craig held the baby. the baby was a real twist, nice. | |||
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: May 2005
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![]() Ok so did I mention I have this weird obsessions with people being pregnant? oh and I can detech a pregnancy in a story from a mile away(like in Pearl Harbor) I blame it on one too many soap operas. So yeah my kind of story. Almost every fanfic I've written or just plain story involves someone getting pregnant..that I blame on too many Lifetime movies. So am I the only one who knew she was going to have a baby then? ![]() Oh and Diana, I only skipped to see that she did indeed have a baby that was all..I had to know! But I also had to watch Everwood ![]() __________________ ||Richard&Kahlan||The only unimaginable fate The Confessor still loves her Seeker after all this time ♥♥♥ "You loved me across time" | |||
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| Elite Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | i thought she was going to tell him that she was pregnant, not that she actually had a baby. but i liked the having a baby more. | |||
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Apr 2005
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| Thanks Katie! So glad you enjoyed it! lol Ria, that's a pretty good talent you've got there! Oh and I was kidding about reprimanding you for reading ahead, I don't care! ![]() __________________ ♥ Global Food Crisis Psalm 41:1 | |||
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: May 2005
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I remember in Pearl Harbor, for you who have seen that movie when she came out of the bathroom after being in their for a long time, I was like oh she's so pregnant..Did I mention how much I love Crash fanfics? Cause I do I seriously can't wait to see where you go from here though. Oh and you made it a girl, so that was worth it all in all.So um, the soundtracks? Tomorrow? Or what's happening? ![]() __________________ ||Richard&Kahlan||The only unimaginable fate The Confessor still loves her Seeker after all this time ♥♥♥ "You loved me across time" | |||
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Apr 2005
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| I have no idea about the soundtracks right now...I guess I can pm leigh and see. I'm sure you guys can just go ahead and post the covers tomorrow if you want though! ![]() I HAD to make it a girl! That's just how I saw it...plus I wanted to have her name the baby Julia after his mom...I'm just a sap like that ![]() ETA: Guys, how about for our 100th reason we make it something simple, like: You'll never give up faith that these two will keep finding their way back to each other. ![]() __________________ ♥ Global Food Crisis Psalm 41:1 Last edited by watchmebleed : 05-01-2006 at 11:55 PM. | |||
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| Elite Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Jul 2004
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| Diana, your story isn't on FF? Awww, I like the idea of naming the child after Julia. They never really mention her after WDC, which is sort of sad. __________________ Can't remember when I last saw you laughing... ![]() | |||
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Apr 2005
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| FF is being mean and it keeps tellling me there's an error when I try to load the document, I just tried again and it's still doing it! ![]() So hopefully tonight I'll actually be able to upload that one, and probably chapter 3 as well...let's hope it's not being a pain anymore later!! __________________ ♥ Global Food Crisis Psalm 41:1 Last edited by watchmebleed : 05-02-2006 at 12:31 PM. | |||
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| Elite Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Jul 2004
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| I'll keep looking out for it, Diana. Chapter 7 is up. Everyone was being productive so I thought I'd churn out some. This was soooo hard and interesting to write. I thought it came out okay, but meh. And yep, this one's totally Crash.![]() __________________ Can't remember when I last saw you laughing... ![]() | |||
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: May 2005
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Off to go read. I'll be looking for your story on FF too Diana..man, all these stories are just making me all giddy. This is the only Crash fix I can get now. ![]() __________________ ||Richard&Kahlan||The only unimaginable fate The Confessor still loves her Seeker after all this time ♥♥♥ "You loved me across time" | |||
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| Obsessed Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Nov 2004
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| Nikki that has been your best chapter yet! Ah I adored that last line about the driveway. And of course him teasing her about her pacing. That was all really cute and most of the dialouge was really smooth - even the cheesey parts worked! ![]() __________________
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: May 2005
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| Aww That chapter was so awesome..hey he was teasing her..hmm what did that come from? That was so cute about the driveway..it was just perfect, I really think the dialouge and stuff fits with the characters.__________________ ||Richard&Kahlan||The only unimaginable fate The Confessor still loves her Seeker after all this time ♥♥♥ "You loved me across time" | |||
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| Master Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Apr 2005
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| Finally got Ch. 2 to go up on ff.net...ch. 3 should be up later tonight. As usual, Nikki, I'm at school so I'll read and review your chapter later but I'm way excited!!! ![]() __________________ ♥ Global Food Crisis Psalm 41:1 | |||
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| Elite Fan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Joined: Jul 2004
Posts: 32,303
| Yay, going to read now!! Thanks guys. I didn't know how to end the chapter exactly, but when all else fails, go back to the basics. ![]() __________________ Can't remember when I last saw you laughing... ![]() | |||
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| Part-Time Fan ![]() Joined: Jan 2006
Posts: 415
| oohh diane i am in love with your ff!! | |||
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