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Old 12-13-2007, 05:46 AM
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Well the poets corner isn't going well so let's open it up to ANY poem...no theme just poetry!

here's another:

The Eagle

I endure for my azure firmament
No kingdom for my own to rule
A roost on which to bear my spawn
Is all that I do commandeer
Or else the time I have ill-spent
And cast away, shall be, to an icy gust
And I will dwell here, play the fool.
My, so called, majesty extinct
My wings unfurled and turned to dust
It is I, alone, my burden to convey
That my progeny do lead the day
So I may sleep and yield to them
This aerie where we do not fear.

It is my right and vain contentment
I take with me on mountain wind
Patrol the heavens; lose myself
To the rapture of these whirling heights
And steel my eyes to distant valleys
Swiftly to plummet
And tether to my sinewy talons
Those that I condemn to death
But who, for their existence, I owe mine
So, gently do I end their pointless flight
Just one fleet razor touch to serve
Released from earth by deity design
Frozen in awe to vent a final breath.

My quarantine indulges me
To glide upon the zephyrs of the gods
Unfettered by the peril of mankind
Yet unto myself I am pledged
To endure
To sire
To sow the morrow with my scions
Fill my tree of life against the odds
I lay my solitary path among the clouds
Dauntless of the blade laid on edge
That seeks to cut the vigor from my span
Condemn to oblivion nurslings of my race
And cleanse the cliffs
My sublimity and grace
I fly
Alone.
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Old 02-20-2008, 09:32 AM
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Well we have more people here so I want to revive this thread if possible so I'll start with a short one:

Through the Mist

How tiny the sphere where we reside
The pebble
Once cast into the placid shoal
Unsettles the blue expanse
To tidings so simple
A cosmic swell to ferry
One ethereal epistle
Returns again, it's answer told
To one in similar circumstance
Who watches
Through the mist
And wonders!
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Good idea to bring it back up

And I love that poem Larry - great words!

I wonder if anyone else will try
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Great words Larry thanks for bringing this back up again!
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Old 02-22-2008, 09:53 PM
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Good idea to bring it back up

And I love that poem Larry - great words!

I wonder if anyone else will try
I can only hope!
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Old 02-27-2008, 04:03 PM
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I can only hope!
Donkies are led
Sea lions are lazy.
If a poem isn't posted
I'm gonna go crazy!
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good one A-G.

I think this thread should be Larry's poetry corner
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good one A-G.

I think this thread should be Larry's poetry corner
Time to give it up as a lost cause!
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Time to give it up as a lost cause!
No way! It's worth bringing up every now and then for new members
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Guess I'm going to have to frequent EVThreads more often to get my poet "jollies" satisfied!
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Here's mine....One of the hardest things I've ever written...

DEAD
I used to be amazed by your presence
But now I’m pained by your evanescence
I see your ghost in my dreams
And my suffering is too deep
Sometimes I wish I could see your face
And feel your sweet embrace...
Your memories lay broken in my floor
And I can’t remember you no more
I need you to free my heart that’s made of stone
And I want to be guided by your soul
Sometimes I think you weren’t real
Everything seems like a dream to me
I can’t think clear
In my mind I’m trying to find you
After a while
I realize….
You’re dead.


AncientGoth... I love your poetry...
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Here's mine....One of the hardest things I've ever written...

DEAD
I used to be amazed by your presence
But now I’m pained by your evanescence
I see your ghost in my dreams
And my suffering is too deep
Sometimes I wish I could see your face
And feel your sweet embrace...
Your memories lay broken in my floor
And I can’t remember you no more
I need you to free my heart that’s made of stone
And I want to be guided by your soul
Sometimes I think you weren’t real
Everything seems like a dream to me
I can’t think clear
In my mind I’m trying to find you
After a while
I realize….
You’re dead.


AncientGoth... I love your poetry...
Thanks but it's no better than yours apparently...that is great!
Maybe your poetry will inspire some of the regulars on here to submit some of theirs...I hope!
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Thanks but it's no better than yours apparently...that is great!
Maybe your poetry will inspire some of the regulars on here to submit some of theirs...I hope!
Thanks!!!!!!!....and yes I really hope to see more poetry!!!!!
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Thanks!!!!!!!....and yes I really hope to see more poetry!!!!!
Well, you will from me but the others you'll have to "kick in the pants" to get a poem out of 'em!
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