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| Passionate Fan  Joined: Aug 2005
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| done  __________________ Just thinking about something better to put up here | |||
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| Beautiful!  Thank you!  The Shrine is growing! | |||
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| Supreme Fan  Joined: Jul 2005
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| okay.. i have no idea if there are many mistakes or not ... so here is my meadow poem  The beauty of the moment, oh so rare Sinking in its breathtaking flair And as they sat there, vowing their love The sun was glistening from above The wind echoed the promises they made Blowing away their supposed fate The predator fell, so hard, so deep For his prey, the trusting sheep And the lamb, with beating heart Told him she never wanted ever to part From him, this moment, his cold skin His venom breath, the sweetest sin, She craved to be close, he needed to be But her blood wanted his senses free The twist inside him made him feel That this love was meant to be real He longed to kiss her burning lips Touched them with his finger tips Looked with anxious golden gaze Into her loving longing face And restrained the need to bite Embraced her with his arms, so tight Felt the warmth and felt her shiver The flow of emotions, an intense river But soon she stilled and fell shy As he hummed her lullaby. And they rested side my side Until the sun declared twilight The lion of himself now sure The devotion between them oh so pure She smiled and let him kiss her mouth His tongue cool, gliding south Over her throat and back to her chin Tasting all of her heated skin, Memorizing what was now his Smiling after their first kiss And so it happened that they found True love onto the meadow’s ground. __________________ oBS RuLeZ"If people don't understand why Bella and Edward should be together by New Moon, then they shouldn't get it." ~ Kristen RK confirmed! suck it haters!!! | |||
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| Master Fan  Joined: Jan 2005
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| Franzi, that is beautiful.  __________________  The Hunger Games avatar by me | |||
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| Lovely, Franzi!  | |||
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| Master Fan  Joined: May 2004
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| *sniffles* Wow, that's beautiful Franzi. You're a really talented writer! __________________ eric♥sookie | ric♥elizabeth | edward♥bella | puck♥rachel | jim♥pam | |||
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| Passionate Fan Joined: Aug 2005
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| omg i love it franzi is lovemichelle you won't get mad if i change the poem, right?  __________________ Just thinking about something better to put up here | |||
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| Banned Joined: Mar 2007
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| Um, even though I love your poem Franzi (it's really great. ) I think we should keep it to Michelle's just cause it's shorter and fits better with the big bed one.  | |||
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| It's WAY too long for the shrine, ale. Don't you think? It should all match up. I mean, maybe we could put Franzi's separate in its own spot on the OP?  Like, center it, and give it its own special spot, all pretty like, you know? | |||
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| Loyal Fan  Joined: Feb 2007
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| Hey Everybody!!  Quote:
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 What it was, was that one person read it in my class and she got someone else to read it and it just sort of caught on. I spent the whole day reading and i got done with New Moon. Now i am about to start Eclipse. __________________ When you're too in love to let it go Lights will guide you home And ignite your bones And I will try to fix you Icon:-Terri- | |||
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| Supreme Fan Joined: Jul 2005
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| aww thanks guys i love writing poems i always get carried away  and at the end its longer than i planned it to be. i think we can put all the poems in the OP. , we also never vote off banners. so i dont see why cant keep all the great stuff in there. __________________ oBS RuLeZ"If people don't understand why Bella and Edward should be together by New Moon, then they shouldn't get it." ~ Kristen RK confirmed! suck it haters!!! | |||
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I think we should leave Michelle's cause it's cute and snarky just like the shrine is supposed to be with the shrine and make a seperate section for yours, Franzi, like Michelle suggested. | |||
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