Roswell - Rebel Alliance #247: Loving her is in his blood, caring for her is in his blood, his attraction to her is in his blood. - Page 7

**LilMouse** · 06-19-2009, 02:05 PM

Tess and Isabel being sisters is fine. Them not being sisters, but friends is fine, too.

I think Max could heal himself.I mean, how stupid would it be if you're giving powers to heal, but it only works on other people.
Plus, when he was in the white room, Pierce cut Max's chest (when he was going to open him up) and then in future episodes the scar was gone. Max may have gotten rid of it.

**LilMouse** · 06-19-2009, 04:58 PM

I always thought Tess Harding and Max Evans went well together. Max Harding just sounds weird.

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Isabel and Tess were in a deep conversation dealing with boyfriends.

ooh Tess has a boyfriend? This should be interesting when Max comes to town. *cough* jealous Max is my favorite *cough*

I like how no one actually got shot and that it was Maria who noticed the alien action. Makes for an interesting twist.

smurF|roswell · 06-19-2009, 05:41 PM

Quite interesting, are you going to go for a Michael/Maria pairing? And have Max not notice Liz in the way he did in the show and only see Tess? ..

I see that the way of Maria seeing it was smart

.. Almost as if to change it where Maria and Michael take Liz & Max's spot in the pilot, and keep Max for Tess!
At least, that's how i saw this going from what's been written so far

Overall, good chapter, keep going

mrbigshot88 · 06-19-2009, 05:54 PM

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Quite interesting, are you going to go for a Michael/Maria pairing? And have Max not notice Liz in the way he did in the show and only see Tess? ..

I see that the way of Maria seeing it was smart

.. Almost as if to change it where Maria and Michael take Liz & Max's spot in the pilot, and keep Max for Tess!
At least, that's how i saw this going from what's been written so far

Overall, good chapter, keep going

You got it, no Max/Liz, well i might make Liz pine a little i dont know about that.Pretty much, Max has only one woman in mind since he saw his first flash of his past life

I think i will make it Tess and Isabel Harding and Max Evans.

And as far as a jealous Max, we will just have to see how that turns out. I think it might be interesting. And who is the mystery boyfriend(s). Maybe they were talking about past BF or only one has one.

I'm glad you all are liking the story though. Any and all ideas are appreciated. If your dont want to write you can always throw in your input. New scenario perhaps would always be interesting

smurF|roswell · 06-19-2009, 06:14 PM

I will endeavor to through in my thoughts and idea's when they arise

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I think i will make it Tess and Isabel Harding and Max Evans.

Sounds good

.. Are they still going to have the parents that Max/Isabel had on the show?

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And as far as a jealous Max, we will just have to see how that turns out. I think it might be interesting. And who is the mystery boyfriend(s). Maybe they were talking about past BF or only one has one.

Ahh the possibilities

.. If you do decide to make a jealous Max then don't drag out that situation for to long, things like that can get annoying to read.

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well i might make Liz pine a little i dont know about that.Pretty much, Max has only one woman in mind since he saw his first flash of his past life

awesome!

.. Maybe make Liz go after Max, but Max doesn't like the attention from her while hes seeking out Tess?

.. the way it should have been, Max trying to get away from Liz because she isn't the one who hes meant to be with

Also, any other fics you think we/i may not have read, please post them!

mrbigshot88 · 06-19-2009, 06:31 PM

Heres a note: I probably wont be able to work on the stories or post for around 10 days, My a/c adapter for my laptop burned up. So yea this sucks. I got like 30 mins of computer left lol Anyways i expect you people to be coming up with some real good ideas in the mean time. Hell, right a chapter of your own lol

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Sounds good .. Are they still going to have the parents that Max/Isabel had on the show?

Same parents. I like them. I wonder what they will think of Max...

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awesome! .. Maybe make Liz go after Max, but Max doesn't like the attention from her while hes seeking out Tess? .. the way it should have been, Max trying to get away from Liz because she isn't the one who hes meant to be with

Thats a good idea. But i probably wont push it to far. I think Liz's main role in the story is like anti-Alien. Since no one saved her, and she isnt 'connected' to anyone. I think her reactions may have been a little different. But i guess we will just have to see.

I dont really plan much out. I just let my fingers type and see what happens lol. There are a few set scenes that i do have planned and how and whats gonna happen. I know how Max/Tess relationship really starts to happen. The fight scenes and stuff.

I need ideas of how to make Tess's personality. Should she be wild, crazy in moods, sorta like isabel. Or do you think she should be like the Max of the group. Trying to snap Michael back from doing stupid stuff. Should she be patient with him or go all Ape **** on him when he screws up?

Since you all are Tess Worshipers, write out what personality you want her to have. What you picture she would be like if she grew up there. And if i like it. I may use it as my back ground for her

Oh yea, i got a surprise later on perhaps with Nerodo. I think you will be able to catch on when im done with the journal. Nothing super fantastic, but interesting.

smurF|roswell · 06-20-2009, 03:47 PM

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Heres a note: I probably wont be able to work on the stories or post for around 10 days, My a/c adapter for my laptop burned up. So yea this sucks. I got like 30 mins of computer left lol Anyways i expect you people to be coming up with some real good ideas in the mean time. Hell, right a chapter of your own lol

Oh damn that sucks, had that happen once, lucky i had an old laptop which used the same kind of a/c adapter.

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I dont really plan much out. I just let my fingers type and see what happens lol. There are a few set scenes that i do have planned and how and whats gonna happen. I know how Max/Tess relationship really starts to happen. The fight scenes and stuff.

Awesome

As for Tess, hmm. I think that with regards to leadership, that she would let Michael lead for the most part. But when she disagrees with him, he listens to her, like a silent leader? As Queen, even if she doesn't know it, she has some influence over Michael's decisions.
Crazy in moods like Isabel? hmm, no. I liked how she was on the show really. Assertive, She knows what she wants and goes for it. (She wanted Max and got him!)
And she always knew where to find him when he needed to think

**LilMouse** · 06-20-2009, 05:24 PM

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And as far as a jealous Max, we will just have to see how that turns out. I think it might be interesting. And who is the mystery boyfriend(s). Maybe they were talking about past BF or only one has one.

like Isabel's dating Kyle?

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Heres a note: I probably wont be able to work on the stories or post for around 10 days, My a/c adapter for my laptop burned up. So yea this sucks. I got like 30 mins of computer left lol Anyways i expect you people to be coming up with some real good ideas in the mean time. Hell, right a chapter of your own lol

Oh no! I hope everything gets fixed.

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Same parents. I like them. I wonder what they will think of Max...

hmm, it's going to be fun when Tess' dad meets Max and sees how into his daughter he is.

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I think Liz's main role in the story is like anti-Alien. Since no one saved her, and she isnt 'connected' to anyone. I think her reactions may have been a little different. But i guess we will just have to see.

Liz was afraid of the aliens even after she was healed. I see her as being scared of them and avoiding them.

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I know how Max/Tess relationship really starts to happen. The fight scenes and stuff.

fights can lead to passionate scenes

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I need ideas of how to make Tess's personality. Should she be wild, crazy in moods, sorta like isabel. Or do you think she should be like the Max of the group. Trying to snap Michael back from doing stupid stuff. Should she be patient with him or go all Ape **** on him when he screws up?

Since you all are Tess Worshipers, write out what personality you want her to have. What you picture she would be like if she grew up there. And if i like it. I may use it as my back ground for her

whatever you do, please don't let Tess be like show Max by denying destiny and ignoring her alien side. I hated that. I'd like it if she was more open to it and not afraid of her feelings for Max - even if she does have a boyfriend.

I really liked show Tess: she's sure of herself and didn't let anyone push her around.

And with Michael/Tess, I think the way Remnants writes them is totally believable. She's sort of like his mother figure, you know? She calms him down and makes him see logic when he gets crazy.

smurF|roswell · 06-20-2009, 08:53 PM

with remnants, i always wondered about Michael and Tess's relationship, i know it reflects on the relationship Rath had Ava, but i just question if there is more to the relationship. Kinda like Zan/Max does in the fic

**LilMouse** · 06-21-2009, 08:42 AM

I always read their relationship as totally platonic. I see them as brother/sister, not lovers. And there was that one chapt where they kissed and they felt absolutely nothing for each other.

**Roswell 10/2/00** · 06-21-2009, 10:31 AM

Same with Kyle and Tess I totally could see them being brother and sister

**LilMouse** · 06-21-2009, 11:24 AM

^

I'm probably one of the few who is very happy KT were made to feel like siblings and didn't explore a romantic relationship. Their chemistry was better as siblings and romance would've ruined that.

**Roswell 10/2/00** · 06-21-2009, 11:57 AM

I agree they got along really well and I enjoyed them

smurF|roswell · 06-21-2009, 01:45 PM

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I always read their relationship as totally platonic. I see them as brother/sister, not lovers. And there was that one chapt where they kissed and they felt absolutely nothing for each other.

I always wondered at the start, why it was Michael getting so close to Tess, but yea i can see it as a brother/sister thing. Maybe because it had never been explored in that way before, at least, them not being so close, it weirds me out a bit

**LilMouse** · 06-21-2009, 04:16 PM

Didn't Max ask Michael to get close to her? Isabel wasn't really interested in Tess, Max was interested, but was going out with Liz at the time, and Michael felt a connection and didn't have a g/f, so he could check her out.