Roswell - Rebel Alliance #247: Loving her is in his blood, caring for her is in his blood, his attraction to her is in his blood. - Page 6

**LilMouse** · 06-17-2009, 08:34 PM

definitely keep writing the story. I love anything that deals with the past life and explains how things happened since the Roswell writers never really explained anything.

**LilMouse** · 06-18-2009, 07:53 AM

What I really like about your fic is that your are exploring ZV's mom's journey to reincarnate them. That was hardly ever explored in fics. It's always about Earth or what happened before the R4 died, never between those moments.

mrbigshot88 · 06-18-2009, 08:11 AM

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What I really like about your fic is that your are exploring ZV's mom's journey to reincarnate them. That was hardly ever explored in fics. It's always about Earth or what happened before the R4 died, never between those moments.

sadly, I dont think I'll be including her much more

probably not until the story starts developing on what happened when all hell broke lose, explaining how the royal four died and how she escaped.

I'm watching the show again for ideas. I've gotten a couple that i wanted to turn around. I think i got how i want Max character to be. In normal situations i think he will be sorta like the max we know, well actually not really, he'll probably be more confident, secretive, sometimes shady, his ethics might even come into account a little.

I think the show pushed to hard on there reactions on if people get killed. Its understandable for the humans to get freaked out, but i think the aliens would accept it alot more easier. Max isnt gonna be evil or anything, probably more manipulative and better at throwing people off his track. unlike Nesedo who just leaves a trail of bodies. I think it might be fun to see them get into it on strategy.

I like how Remnants played off that whole staring at each other vibe thing in the beginning and thats how i always pictured it. So ill probably role with that
I know how im gonna first introduce max to the others i think.

Ok, but how about some ideas on how the shooting is gonna play out. Max is not there. I got my own sorta ideas, but i was wondering if you guys would like to throw in your 2 cents? It'd be appreciated because thats what i need work on now

**LilMouse** · 06-18-2009, 10:55 AM

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I'm watching the show again for ideas.

oh boy, is it unbearable?

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he'll probably be more confident, secretive, sometimes shady, his ethics might even come into account a little.

I really like shady characters....yes, I'm weird in what types of characters I support. So Max being shady, confident, and manipulative is going to be fun.
I really can't wait to see how his personality clashes (or doesn't) with a more human Tess.

The idea of the aliens handling death better than humans is really believable. Maybe on their home planet death isn't viewed as such a horrible, sad thing, but as honorable, or something?

As far as the shooting goes, if Max isn't there, then what point does it have to the story?

mrbigshot88 · 06-18-2009, 11:15 AM

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oh boy, is it unbearable?

I really like shady characters....yes, I'm weird in what types of characters I support. So Max being shady, confident, and manipulative is going to be fun.
I really can't wait to see how his personality clashes (or doesn't) with a more human Tess.

The idea of the aliens handling death better than humans is really believable. Maybe on their home planet death isn't viewed as such a horrible, sad thing, but as honorable, or something?

As far as the shooting goes, if Max isn't there, then what point does it have to the story?

The show is bearable. im only hubble right now. I dont have a problem with the show until the whole situation with Tess and the death of Alex. And she being evil. Well... there are other areas that i dislike the M/T/L situation
Its just that the writers should have taken a different turn. and ended with T/M and the aliens leaving to save their world.

The point of the shooting is that that is what brings the attention of Aliens. Not only does it bring the FBI, but it brings Nesedo and Max. So an alien event has to occur. I just need ideas. And its the best way to get the humans involved.

**LilMouse** · 06-18-2009, 12:19 PM

the perfect ending to Roswell would've been MMiIT flying off to their home world in a space ship. We didn't even need to see them save their home world. As long as we knew they were going to TRY, I'd be happy.
I just wanted to see MMiI accept their past.

Um, maybe you can make a UC human/alien couple (like Michael/Liz or Isabel/Kyle) or a CC couple (like Maria/Michael) part of the story, so when someone is shot - Liz, Kyle or Maria - one of the aliens attempts to save them. I know Michael had healing powers, right? Not on the same scale as Max's, but didn't he heal once? Or maybe Tess tries to mindwarp someone and it turns out to be a bad decision?

mrbigshot88 · 06-18-2009, 01:06 PM

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the perfect ending to Roswell would've been MMiIT flying off to their home world in a space ship. We didn't even need to see them save their home world. As long as we knew they were going to TRY, I'd be happy.
I just wanted to see MMiI accept their past.

Um, maybe you can make a UC human/alien couple (like Michael/Liz or Isabel/Kyle) or a CC couple (like Maria/Michael) part of the story, so when someone is shot - Liz, Kyle or Maria - one of the aliens attempts to save them. I know Michael had healing powers, right? Not on the same scale as Max's, but didn't he heal once? Or maybe Tess tries to mindwarp someone and it turns out to be a bad decision?

I agree. That would have been the perfect ending. it should have taken oh 5 or so season though

lol

umm im not sure what the couples are going to be. In the show Michael head river dogs ankle, but then i think it counteracted itself and started saying that he couldnt heal. Then when max dies their abilities change. I didnt really like that.
I like the idea of... um bloodlines, the Royals are in power because they come from the most distinguished family line. A very powerful line.

In the shooting i was debating on having Michael do a split second reaction on instincts so to speak and throwing the gun man into the wall. While every one is ducking, either Liz or Maria notice. I dont think i want the other Aliens to be able to heal.

It could be a different scenario then the shooting got any ideas

smurF|roswell · 06-18-2009, 02:23 PM

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The point of the shooting is that that is what brings the attention of Aliens. Not only does it bring the FBI, but it brings Nesedo and Max. So an alien event has to occur. I just need ideas. And its the best way to get the humans involved.

Yea that makes sence regarding the shooting needing to happen, i think i remember that that's what got Nasedo's attention to go to Roswell in the show. As for a way to get the humans involved, maybe liz still gets shot, but it only scrapes her arm, and is something that Tess can heal, as seen Tess can heal at least a small wound. .. but Tess wouldnt get these flashes and "fall" in love with her

... just a possible idea to get the humans involved with Max not there to heal Liz

smurF|roswell · 06-18-2009, 03:00 PM

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I know Michael had healing powers, right?

I believe Michael only had healing powers after he got the seal when Max died, and he was getting his powers. But im sure that after Max got the seal back he lost those powers

mrbigshot88 · 06-18-2009, 04:05 PM

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I believe Michael only had healing powers after he got the seal when Max died, and he was getting his powers. But im sure that after Max got the seal back he lost those powers

He also healed river dogs broken or hurt ankle when they were in fraiser woods. Then the show backed out of that.

Did Tess actually have healing powers? Or is that just something that was made up in a fan fic?

Also, can max heal himself, because in the episode where max gets beat up by kyles friends, michael asks why doesnt he fix himself and he replies that he has to stay under the radar

smurF|roswell · 06-18-2009, 04:37 PM

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Did Tess actually have healing powers? Or is that just something that was made up in a fan fic?

Tess heals Max's face in an episode, the one where Max runs into the crashdown after Nasedo was attacked and killed. Where Max is just looking at Liz, but Liz is looking at Tess because she managed to heal him. It was talked about earlier

.. As a good rebel moment!

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Also, can max heal himself, because in the episode where max gets beat up by kyles friends, michael asks why doesnt he fix himself and he replies that he has to stay under the radar

I'm sure he couldn't o.O

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He also healed river dogs broken or hurt ankle when they were in fraiser woods. Then the show backed out of that.

Ah then maybe he has the a small amount of healing like Tess has.

mrbigshot88 · 06-18-2009, 04:47 PM

Ok,thanks

Im bout done with Nerodo's journal, but i dont know im kinda disappointed. I dont think its really all that good. I'll post it later. I might try redoing it

smurF|roswell · 06-18-2009, 05:13 PM

Post it when your satisfied with it

smurF|roswell · 06-18-2009, 10:04 PM

That does sound quite interesting bigshot, i think you should keep going in that direction

mrbigshot88 · 06-19-2009, 01:50 PM

Ok i need s quick opinion here, should i make Tess and Isabel sisters as in Evans. Or something else? And is there any suggestions?