Thread: ★ The Head & The Heart ★ {BellamyღClarke} #71: "Right now she is the only one he cares about, and desperate times call for desperate measures."
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Old 05-15-2016, 06:03 PM
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Originally Posted by Voldara (View Post)
I think she means the set of 3, Sarah.
Oh sorry, clearly don't read well.

Alexa do you think we could add "and" before the "desperate ..."? I think it flows better that way but if it was because it wouldn't fit, then forget about it.

The other changes you suggested sound good to me.
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