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Ahhh Angela you are the best reviewer ever! I loved it, especially the constructive criticism. I used to have a beta but she left the fandom and I got to scared to write without her amazing editing/feedback so now I'm all on my own with it. So, seriously, I love the critique as much as the praise!
I hope to continue and write the rest. It'll just go kind of AU because my original concept isn't the Santorini story they told on the show. And that's what makes me hesitate a little bit.
edit: you're right about the dialogue. that's my screenwriter getting in the way.
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