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| Quote: I like the prologue, you should post it on FanFiction.net or something!
Dialogue can be a bit more challenging, but it just requires practice and once you understand a character it's a lot easier to write.
I like the idea of a more "gutsy" Max. Max in the show, IMO, sometimes sat back way too much and waited for things to happen, but we occasionally got glimpses of who I call "the Zan" inside of Max like in the first couple of episodes of S2, and when he wasn't staring longingly at Liz all day * rolls eyes *
I do like Liz as a character (she's even more gutsy than Max at times!) so I hope you don't write her as "pure evil"  | 1. yea liz wont be evil, she might not be as understanding because i dont think im gonna save her 'like' max did. In fact i dont think max will even be there in Roswell for a lil while
2. I need someone to write dialogue for me i suck
3. If i continue, ill post on fanfiction when i got few chapters
should there be alien and human relationships?
oh another tid bit that i thought id mention, is that i believe that the aliens powers get stronger the more they use them. They become easier to use. Instead of them having like a certain amount of energy, for instance it just tires them out when they access that part of there brain, but if they are use to it and trained for it they can continually use them. And learning new techniques tax them out much quicker because its hard for them to concentrate. Does any of what i said make sense
Last edited by mrbigshot88 : 06-15-2009 at 12:31 AM.
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