Fan Forum - View Single Post - Rebel Alliance #247: Loving her is in his blood, caring for her is in his blood, his attraction to her is in his blood.

Izzychase · 06-14-2009, 07:19 PM

I like the prologue, you should post it on FanFiction.net or something!

Dialogue can be a bit more challenging, but it just requires practice and once you understand a character it's a lot easier to write.

I like the idea of a more "gutsy" Max. Max in the show, IMO, sometimes sat back way too much and waited for things to happen, but we occasionally got glimpses of who I call "the Zan" inside of Max like in the first couple of episodes of S2, and when he wasn't staring longingly at Liz all day * rolls eyes *

I do like Liz as a character (she's even more gutsy than Max at times!) so I hope you don't write her as "pure evil"