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| Quote: telling it like it is  mrbigshot88 I think that's a really good beginning to a fic I'd love to read. I can't write any fics now due to personal problems, but you should continue it. I want Max to meet Tess and NOT be attracted to Liz. | Im pretty good at action scenes, but i lack the ability to write a proper dialogue i think. I dont think im very good at making it, but i dont know we;ll see.
I was thinking of having Michael use his powers in the crash down to push the guy with the gun into a wall. Like on pure instinct, not really knowing how he did it. Thats how maria gets involve, or liz i dont know.
Also i was thinking about making Max more assertive and powerful. I always got the feeling that Tess didnt try her hardest when she was with Nasedo. And Nasedo will be taking orders from max sometimes, but more working into a team. But to keep max from becoming 'heartless' he will have a back ground in up to like 12 or something with a human family before Nasedo takes him. So on a regular bases, Max is more like himself, but when danger or other stuff happens he will be more like zan.
What do you guys think of that idea |
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