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| Passionate Fan
Joined: Apr 2008
Posts: 3,476
| Okay, it's only the first attempt. I'm glad about every improvement suggestion.
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 __________________ my Hero 
Her best move
you can hurt me, break me, disrespect me, and make me feel like a total idiot. But for some reason - I'll still love you. |
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