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I think the conversation at the end may have led us to believe there may be more coming, because it sounded like the conversation didn't necessarily end there.
Isn't it possible to edit on ff.net once you put it up? That seems strange. Or did you mean you went back and changed the error? Because I scanned the last few lines and couldn't see any. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] Anyway, this is just a suggestion, but maybe another paragraph on the end, which entails both of them falling silent and pondering over the current situation, would wrap up the fic a little better? [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
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