 | | 07-04-2008, 07:29 PM |
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| Thanks Laz  I think it could have been more consistent though, and I used "me" to much.
Thanks Sheida!
This was my favorite part of your poem Laz:
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My war within was not a fight
Just my chance to put things right
Before darkness takes the light
To rest.
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