| You mean where it seems like the author is just saying things.
"They went the store and had lunch and Sarah thought it was good...."
because that drives me batty to. There's so many words in the English language, you can pretty up just about anything there's no reason to just say things, when telling is so much better.
And I'm staunchly against fic with unplanned pregnancy. I've read one, maybe two, where it's worked and felt real. Otherwise, it's just tiring.
And I think, that if you write one type of story with one type of plot, say rape!fic, (which I still hate) then your next five stories shouldn't have the exact same plot with just different lines. __________________ "The thing about us, you see, is that, well... I shouldn't love him, he's mean and dirty andhe smells kind
of weird, I mean he's Lynn. But, at the end of the day, when everything's all over. He's the only one I want.Despite the smell. And that time he pooped on my bookbag."{L y n n & G l e n}
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