| I'm not a writer, but I enjoy reading fanfiction and have, of course, read some bad fiction, I can at least try to give some tipps =)
-Changes in character should be traceable and not drastic (although there is a logical explanation).
-Don't stretch certain parts. Filler chapters are no problem, as long as they are well written, not just sth scrambled together in 5 minutes. 4 fillers are OK, depends on how many chapters the actual story has, but other than that, there has to be something happening in the story, don't just beat about the bush. __________________ If you were the wood, I'd be the fire. If you were the love, I'd be the desire. If you were a castle, I'd be your moat and if you were an ocean, I'd learn to float...
Jenny |