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lexhuntzberger · 12-31-2007, 12:40 AM

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ok well compared to what your dad does it's like nothing

I am a crossing guard and then I baby sit 2 2yr olds and then a 4 yr old
then I am going to get myhome based bus. going this yr

Compared to what my dad does, it sounds fun

I'm not even sure what it is my dad does, but he's never home, so I bet what you do is far more better.

(excellent grammar I know

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Of course you can

Okay so the first chapter is sad... sad, sad, sad. It's about 3 years after Yale and it's how Logan feels after losing Rory and he has her funeral and finally comes to terms at the end of it that she's not coming back. Then chapter two... dun dun dunnn! He wakes up in what is his junior year of Yale dorm room. He gets up and gets dressed confused as to where he is and how he got here. He wears all black because he feels like morning his loss. Then he finds himself going searching for Finn's soul mate and he feels this is all too familiar. He walks past a brunette girl and quickly dismisses her because he only has eyes for one girl... and she's gone. But then the brunette girl comes and follows him to the dorm they have stopped in front and when he turns around, he sees Rory, as she was her sophomore year of college and he remembers it instantly as the second time they met... or meet, depending on who's POV you are in.

Do you like it? Does it sound too... done? I need an opinion