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Old 08-20-2004, 06:18 PM
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Orton
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Hiyah Mandy

Yay! someone who is actually gonna come here and talk about fics.

I gave you feedback on your last chapter but I'll do it in more depth.

I gotta say it was simple and straightfoward, but you gave us a slight jolt there with the Justin declaration Don't wanna say what exactly some people might wanna read it
It was abrupt but a good one I actually find it realistic cause Jennifer wants her son to be happy... and I really think that she would let him, but obviously at the same time not too but Justin being able to say that to his mother, shows a great bond between mother and son, and its adorable (hahah! Alyssa would love that word) Anyway I would have actually wanted to see more emotions from Craig though. And you know what I said about Brian he needs a pat on the back

Anyway everybody should read this story a very classy AU

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